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6/26/23, 8:35 PM
I loved the ending and yes more such stories but make them go on. For instance and I have told you before. I would have loved to see what happened from here on. What relationship did these two develop. Also this transition should have taken a few more chapters it was very abrupt. But all said, it is what I wanted for Jake to become owned by Matt.

6/27/23, 9:25 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) So glad you enjoyed! This story s all based On a roleplay I did and because I loved the RP so much I wanted to be as faithful to the original source as possible. I;m not opposed to expanding at some point. I’ve been toying with the idea of doing a short series focusing on Benji, but for now I’m happy with DOAA and excited to find my next project

Anonymous
6/28/23, 4:11 AM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Definitely following your stories. You have a knack with words and I dig it.
6/28/23, 1:12 AM
Good work, thanks!
6/28/23, 12:19 AM
Have to say I stood up at attention when I saw this story on the home page. Like always you didn't disappoint. It ran through my mind how the technicians were going to double cross Sean. I was expecting the techs to inject nanobots in Patrick. Make him a sleeper agent to over power Sean and fuck him into submission. The picture you painted of Patrick 2.0 or 3.0 would even make the irresistible Sean fuck drunk. To be made into the perfect muscled sex machine to be used and control my captor is certainly a kink I can get into. Reminds me a little bit of the old story "At Will" by Musclebuff (that was dedicated to @FanTCdude and @Absman420 ).

6/28/23, 12:54 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) .... You're going to like the next part (or it might take two parts to get where I'm going depending how wordy I feel). Thanks for the support It was almost as good as a BJ. 😊
CHT
6/27/23, 11:57 PM
Just thinking, with the old feud between Emimem and MGK it might be interesting if Fox enlists him to humiliate the boys. Some male of make spanking might put them in their place lol
Sem
6/27/23, 3:42 PM
I want next chapter!
Anonymous
6/26/23, 1:01 AM
This have be a WHILE NEW PERSPECTIVE of Sammy. And I have just one thing for him: RESPECT. He knows what he got, HOW to use it BUT RESPONSIBLY using it. "With great power comes great responsibility" and Mr. Parker is owning that responsibility. Salud! I am LOVING this twist!

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon, that's exactly what I was going for.
6/27/23, 2:39 PM
You are such a good writer!! What is the read oder for your works to understand the bigger universe you are making?

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@[That one Guy you know](/user/show/10001793) Parker Brothers which includes Adventures and John's tale, Top Dawg and then Foul Ball to get the whole thing. Characters show up in Buck Stop Here but the story isn't needed to understand Eden.
CHT
6/25/23, 10:48 PM
Such a hot story .... hoping to see Pete and MGK humiliated and forced to do stuff together by Fox! great writing!

Anonymous
6/26/23, 8:14 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Thanks man, glad you’re enjoying it. If you got any suggestions or things you wanna see added lmk

6/27/23, 12:52 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) totally agree
6/27/23, 12:28 PM
Great story !!
6/26/23, 4:40 PM
Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

6/27/23, 6:03 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! Dean didn't become a sex god, at least not in a literal sense. However, he's also not fully out of the prayer's sway; he's still only had sex with 50% of the gods present after all. I did worry about the floating perspective, but I felt it was important to really get into everyones minds and show how they were being influenced. I hoped the third person omniscient narration and paragraph breaks would mellow out the oddness.