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5/20/23, 2:34 PM
II am so happy of your story ratings :heart_eyes: If you think this chapter is hot and full of mind controlling, you can't imagine what Chapter 4 - Mindfucked Muscle Show is. > Dumblex released a guttural moan as he felt me enter him, his body stiffening against the exquisite invasion. His muscles clenched as he acclimatized to the sensation, his face a cocktail of intense pleasure and the exertion of holding the plank. > "Now, Dumblex," I whispered, my voice a velvety murmur against his ear, "I want you to do push-ups. And while you're at it, stroke yourself. I want to see those muscles in your arms work double-time. I want you to show me how strong you really are." I will post Chapter 3 - Dumblex here soon, check out my [profile](https://onlyfans.com/606868020/fantasy_whispers) to read it now before anyone else!
Anonymous
5/20/23, 2:06 PM
This is awakening something about clowns in me 👀 Please do a chapter 2!
Absfan
5/20/23, 1:40 PM
Would love a spin off about Jon’s friends back home taking advantage of him getting “stuck”
5/20/23, 5:27 AM
Hot diggity dog. Can't wait for more.
5/20/23, 5:01 AM
I like this story, the idea of dumb jocks will always be the best 👌 excellent
Mar 31, 2023
3/31/23, 6:57 PM
I love this idea, but I really wish it spent a wee bit more time on feeling the ottoman transformation, sort of like your condomification story. In any case I did enjoy it.

4/2/23, 3:49 PM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) Yeah, I was considering adding a section where he either feels the transformation or his changed body, but I didn't see a way to do it without breaking the flow and pacing, but it was definitely on my mind and I definitely want to write a more transformation-centric story like 'The Trophy Shelf' in the future. Not entirely sure when, but stay tuned I guess, haha.

5/19/23, 11:31 PM
@[Cockatrice](/user/show/620105) Ya know I’ve always wondered about the condoms who kept sperm warm and usable at sperm banks in “The Trophy Shelf” might be an interesting, if less warm and caring story…
Anonymous
5/19/23, 7:38 AM
I wanna see wolfie get taken down by Kevin and Tommy. More pls.
Sel
5/19/23, 12:37 AM
Can’t wait to see what’s next!
5/18/23, 6:14 PM
I wonder if this is all building up to a finale with dad? I’m looking forward to future installments
5/18/23, 1:20 AM
I think Jake is going to find he falls right into their training as a means of bidding his time. And he will eventually realize what he has permitted himself to become. Though that is just a guess as a reader. As for Cal, it interesting to juggle the ideas of him either finding his 'inner puppy', or still being resistant and broken in. And what uniform he is made to wear as a doggie? There are many popular styles. Leather, rubber, hoods, paws, tail, jockstraps, restraints. So many options. Or if any other gear is applied to Jake as well for his training. This has been a pleasure to read so far. Especially the last two chapters as we hone in more on Jake and Matt.

5/18/23, 11:19 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I’m really glad you’re enjoying, mate…you’re making some very good observations that’s all I’ll say…more to cum…well, for some😈