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5/22/23, 10:48 AM
This is one of the most compelling, amazing and outstanding stories I have ever read. To be honest, it should be called more than just a "story" - this is shaping itself into a true novel. I truly hope you continue as I personally would love to continue to read. It is rare that I read longer than I jack off, but this story was just so compelling even after I put my dick down I literally couldn't put this story down. Pure talent. I had to come and leave a comment to try and give the biggest praise I can. Few stories have reached this level of true outstanding storytelling as this over the many years I have been reading on GSS (and I have been reading since it was NCMC!) - and with such an original concept that hasn't been done to death. Bravo to you and your mind and thank you for sharing your gifts with us.
5/21/23, 11:16 PM
More.....please, morrreeee:drooling_face:
5/21/23, 10:13 PM
One of my fave stories in a while. This gets me hottttt. Thank you!!
5/20/23, 10:28 AM
If Jake has any sense, he will comply but I suspect that is not what you plan for him. Eventually I do hope Matt becomes his master even if he still is a slave and Jake will get to love sucking Matt's cock and taking it in his ass and eating Matt's cum. Thank you this entertaining story and I hope you continue it for a very long time.

5/20/23, 10:35 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you, mate. We’ll have to see if Jake can widen up and understand his place.
5/20/23, 10:12 PM
Another great chapter. I am pretty confident that Matt wants both revenge and Jake. Hopefully he does becomes Jake's master; he knows how to give and take. For Jake, it feels like it could still go either way, accepting his new place or fighting it. It will be interesting what twists that brings. And for Callum, a jock turned rubber gimp pup is awesome! A muscled alpha jock now on all fours in black rubber is the best! The pills in his system is a clever sadistic twist over caging him too. Definitely hope to read more of him too. I wonder if there is anything left of Callum in there?
5/20/23, 1:21 PM
Great start ! Hope Max will make Alex into leather too :wink:

5/20/23, 2:40 PM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Hey, thank you for your feedback and for your idea. I'm always pleased to get new inputs for my story. I will surely consider leather too :grin:
5/20/23, 2:39 PM
II am so happy of your story ratings :heart_eyes: If you think this chapter is hot and full of mind controlling, you can't imagine what Chapter 4 - Mindfucked Muscle Show is. > Dumblex released a guttural moan as he felt me enter him, his body stiffening against the exquisite invasion. His muscles clenched as he acclimatized to the sensation, his face a cocktail of intense pleasure and the exertion of holding the plank. > "Now, Dumblex," I whispered, my voice a velvety murmur against his ear, "I want you to do push-ups. And while you're at it, stroke yourself. I want to see those muscles in your arms work double-time. I want you to show me how strong you really are." I will post Chapter 3 - Dumblex here soon, check out my [profile](https://onlyfans.com/606868020/fantasy_whispers) to read it now before anyone else!
5/20/23, 2:34 PM
II am so happy of your story ratings :heart_eyes: If you think this chapter is hot and full of mind controlling, you can't imagine what Chapter 4 - Mindfucked Muscle Show is. > Dumblex released a guttural moan as he felt me enter him, his body stiffening against the exquisite invasion. His muscles clenched as he acclimatized to the sensation, his face a cocktail of intense pleasure and the exertion of holding the plank. > "Now, Dumblex," I whispered, my voice a velvety murmur against his ear, "I want you to do push-ups. And while you're at it, stroke yourself. I want to see those muscles in your arms work double-time. I want you to show me how strong you really are." I will post Chapter 3 - Dumblex here soon, check out my [profile](https://onlyfans.com/606868020/fantasy_whispers) to read it now before anyone else!
Anonymous
5/20/23, 2:06 PM
This is awakening something about clowns in me 👀 Please do a chapter 2!
Absfan
5/20/23, 1:40 PM
Would love a spin off about Jon’s friends back home taking advantage of him getting “stuck”