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5/29/23, 9:26 AM
Jack, just read for the first time full series. Awesome stories & up to your usual high standard of writing & imagination!
5/29/23, 3:14 AM
i also think that Skippy's punishment is a little heavy for this offense, but from the overall context of the story i SORT OF understand where Titan is coming from. Skippy is a Grade A asshole across the board, he's intolerant, uses slurs without regard or knowledge of how wrong his language is, and he was a menace and this is a zero tolerance corrective regimen he's been placed in. However, Skippy wasn't TRYING to be bad, so that's why a lot of us are like, "Can't he get a stern lecture and a warning?!?!" as opposed to when he would use the F slur or tell one of the pack to fuck off. he obviously wasn't trying to hurt Oak, he just didn't know the right language to use. Obviously Titan isn't going to let him plead his case and Oak is basically retraumatized right now, but as the audience we feel just a little sorry for Skippy. personally i am very glad that he isn't getting his butt whooped or other physically intense punishment, but the butt zapper is kinda bad tho. The hypno chair isn't as bad as i was worried about. but i definitely still feel like Skippy as omega didn't get the chance to plead his case of ignorance. He's been trying to be good, even if he's not entirely sure how. perhaps Titan, after hearing Skippy's side later can apologize for giving a heavier punishment than Skippy earned at the time, even if that step was going to be taken at some point in his retraining anyways? all this to say that this is a REALLY WELL WRITTEN STORY because we're ALL up in arms for justice for skippy. which just means that you've written him so well that we see this very strongly from his point of view, and we empathize with him heavily. Excellent job. Cannot WAIT for the next chapter of "Zonked out pup Skippy"!
Anonymous
5/25/23, 7:30 AM
hot!!! I hope they break Officer Stellato so he is constantly craving their dicks and has to beg for it. would be hot if they make him stay on as a cop (and use him in their criminal activities), then have him be their 24/7 slutty pussy bitch servicing them sexually when he's not on duty. maybe they whore out his cop pussy for cash, and keep his cock locked up until it shrinks down to just 2" rock hard. that way he can never be a stud with the ladies again, and only gets off when he's getting fucked and humiliated. I hope the hot cop cuts hands free from a pussy-gasm in the next chapter.

Anonymous
5/28/23, 9:45 PM
@Anonymous All great ideas! What good is a cop bitch if he is not in uniform!
5/28/23, 12:56 PM
Wow. Maybe I've read the last chapter wrong but Titan has gone too far. As I understood it, Skippy had no intention of insulting Oak, it's just that this is the term he knows. I can understand their lack of patience but I feel this is an over kill given the circumstances.

5/28/23, 1:02 PM
@Reader Maybe I should clarify. I am not transgender and I don't know many trans people. I am also a country that speaks a language that is not English, so my knowledge of the severity of this term might be lacking. I don't think he should've used it and I definitely think he needs to learn and apologize to Oak. Oak has every right to be upset and he deserves an apology, but at the same time it seems like Skippy was speaking from a place of ignorance, not from a place of cruelty.

Anonymous
5/28/23, 9:19 PM
@Reader In the States, it is a very derogative term, especially since some very prejudiced politicians use it all the time.
5/28/23, 12:28 PM
I just read Chap 23 & it seems my hope for a relation between Matt and his sub in training is beyound repair. However how much better would it be for Matt to use this humiliation to get up, train himself & finally break Jake and make him his, not as a slave but a compliant underling. I don't know if that is even possible but I hope so.. Ias
5/28/23, 12:22 PM
Acho que nunca tinha visto um brasileiro escrevendo um conto aqui,me deixa feliz saber que existem, bom saber que não sou o único que gosta de hipnose,nunca fui hipnotizado mas parece muito bom,ótimo conto
5/26/23, 10:17 PM
Really thanks very much for this new event focused on Sexdroids based on Nier Automata and Nier series all of them look pretty good also i hiope martin get some revenue from the sponsor support for the game :D

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5/27/23, 7:46 AM
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5/27/23, 8:29 PM
Hey Fanboi!! THANKS 4 the positive comments & GR8 2 hear from U!! Happy you enjoyed the new installment (& the timeline jump)!!:sparkles: I'm percolating ideas 4 the 50th chapter that will provide some new/innovative twists (& a couple new characters)! :boomerang: Have a HAPPY/SAFE Memorial Day Weekend!!:sunglasses:
5/27/23, 7:46 PM
OMG I was so psyched to see this fic pop up again and you did not disappoint! Fun, fun, fun! And smoking hot. I love the time jump idea. I'm deeply intrigued to see the status quo unfolding bit by bit. And I'm curious to learn more about the surprises in store for the anniversary Seems like Theo did a real solid job of consolidating power but then again we all know that when you get too high you tend to start to get blindspots that might backfire :P
5/26/23, 12:44 AM
No going back for him now.

5/26/23, 10:27 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hold your horses, buck. There’s still more to come😈

5/27/23, 3:17 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) A guy can hope! But the training of any slave has its ups and downs with much to learn. And Jake has just started. But he at least recognizes the need to obey. And I'm sure that Billy (the devil) is going to make it as hard for him as possible. All the while showing him what's become of to his former friend. Speaking of that: maybe have a gym session to keep their form and anytime Jake tries to talk with Callum, all he does is bark and woof. Or after sometime he is made to watch some 'graduating ceremony' where Callum is allowed to finally cum and gets shattered by it. Fully embraces the rubber pup life. Or if you wish to fully dehumanize Callum, put lenses over the eyelets of the hood and his stick in a sheath so that there is nothing put a rubber pup in his place.