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5/29/23, 12:23 PM
Jack, you will always be the center of attention, in real life and in the stories on Gay Spiral.
5/13/23, 3:31 AM
❤️❤️❤️❤️

5/29/23, 11:51 AM
@[raleighleathersir](/user/show/924259) Please check your email Sir. You should have a message from me. It most likely went into a spam folder. Most humbly yours, Matt
Anonymous
5/29/23, 7:04 AM
I agree with @Reader and @Mind Labyrinth that Titan's punishment in this chapter is heavy-handed. It also demonstrates Titan's lack of understanding of the situation and his presumption that Skippy said a bad word out of spite, which wasn't the case. Skippy spoke out of ignorance, which makes the punishment and its severity come across as being both mean-spirited and vengeful instead of trying to help Skippy become a better human being and a part of the pack. Thus, the punishment is counterproductive and it draws the pack's attention to Skippy's past and away from the the progress that he's made. This bring Titan's leadership abilities into question because my sympathy in this chapter is solely for Skippy. To be punished so severely while not necessarily understanding why could make Skippy feel that he's unredeemable and will never be accepted by the pack. It could also make him fearful of saying or doing anything. As far as Oak goes, if he's crying simply because he was called a name (out of ignorance), that strikes me as not only being incredibly weak, it also demonstrates his inability to find any inner strength to overcome his own past, which also doesn't bode well for Titan's leadership abilities.

5/29/23, 7:32 AM
@Anonymous My dude. Crying because your upset or hurt is not weakness. It’s coping. And no matter how much you think your over something or have strength against it. Sometimes that does not matter a gold plated fart when you get slapped in the proverbial face by the same shit that nearly drove you to the brink. I do understand the rest of your concerns as well as others, however, and will take them under advisement.

Anonymous
5/29/23, 10:21 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) I am a person with gender issues and have wrestled with it. You do never get over it. I have a friend, matter of fact my closest friend since 4th grade who has transitioned, and know that she has nothing to do with her past because of the fear of non-acceptance. So with a transperson that is always with them and then to be called a name that was usually flung at them, yes you would tend to cry. I hope this helps, I remember I was so different from boys growing up that I was called a fag at age three and yes it still hurts all these years later.
5/29/23, 9:26 AM
Jack, just read for the first time full series. Awesome stories & up to your usual high standard of writing & imagination!
5/29/23, 3:14 AM
i also think that Skippy's punishment is a little heavy for this offense, but from the overall context of the story i SORT OF understand where Titan is coming from. Skippy is a Grade A asshole across the board, he's intolerant, uses slurs without regard or knowledge of how wrong his language is, and he was a menace and this is a zero tolerance corrective regimen he's been placed in. However, Skippy wasn't TRYING to be bad, so that's why a lot of us are like, "Can't he get a stern lecture and a warning?!?!" as opposed to when he would use the F slur or tell one of the pack to fuck off. he obviously wasn't trying to hurt Oak, he just didn't know the right language to use. Obviously Titan isn't going to let him plead his case and Oak is basically retraumatized right now, but as the audience we feel just a little sorry for Skippy. personally i am very glad that he isn't getting his butt whooped or other physically intense punishment, but the butt zapper is kinda bad tho. The hypno chair isn't as bad as i was worried about. but i definitely still feel like Skippy as omega didn't get the chance to plead his case of ignorance. He's been trying to be good, even if he's not entirely sure how. perhaps Titan, after hearing Skippy's side later can apologize for giving a heavier punishment than Skippy earned at the time, even if that step was going to be taken at some point in his retraining anyways? all this to say that this is a REALLY WELL WRITTEN STORY because we're ALL up in arms for justice for skippy. which just means that you've written him so well that we see this very strongly from his point of view, and we empathize with him heavily. Excellent job. Cannot WAIT for the next chapter of "Zonked out pup Skippy"!
Anonymous
5/25/23, 7:30 AM
hot!!! I hope they break Officer Stellato so he is constantly craving their dicks and has to beg for it. would be hot if they make him stay on as a cop (and use him in their criminal activities), then have him be their 24/7 slutty pussy bitch servicing them sexually when he's not on duty. maybe they whore out his cop pussy for cash, and keep his cock locked up until it shrinks down to just 2" rock hard. that way he can never be a stud with the ladies again, and only gets off when he's getting fucked and humiliated. I hope the hot cop cuts hands free from a pussy-gasm in the next chapter.

Anonymous
5/28/23, 9:45 PM
@Anonymous All great ideas! What good is a cop bitch if he is not in uniform!
5/28/23, 12:56 PM
Wow. Maybe I've read the last chapter wrong but Titan has gone too far. As I understood it, Skippy had no intention of insulting Oak, it's just that this is the term he knows. I can understand their lack of patience but I feel this is an over kill given the circumstances.

5/28/23, 1:02 PM
@Reader Maybe I should clarify. I am not transgender and I don't know many trans people. I am also a country that speaks a language that is not English, so my knowledge of the severity of this term might be lacking. I don't think he should've used it and I definitely think he needs to learn and apologize to Oak. Oak has every right to be upset and he deserves an apology, but at the same time it seems like Skippy was speaking from a place of ignorance, not from a place of cruelty.

Anonymous
5/28/23, 9:19 PM
@Reader In the States, it is a very derogative term, especially since some very prejudiced politicians use it all the time.
5/28/23, 12:28 PM
I just read Chap 23 & it seems my hope for a relation between Matt and his sub in training is beyound repair. However how much better would it be for Matt to use this humiliation to get up, train himself & finally break Jake and make him his, not as a slave but a compliant underling. I don't know if that is even possible but I hope so.. Ias
5/28/23, 12:22 PM
Acho que nunca tinha visto um brasileiro escrevendo um conto aqui,me deixa feliz saber que existem, bom saber que não sou o único que gosta de hipnose,nunca fui hipnotizado mas parece muito bom,ótimo conto
5/26/23, 10:17 PM
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5/27/23, 7:46 AM
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