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May 28, 2023
5/30/23, 6:45 AM
So given the amount of feedback I’m getting sounds like this was not a popular avenue. So I’m working on a rewrite and will post it here soon. Thanks for your thoughts and opinions everyone. Although a few of you may wanna go ask a trans person how they feel about that particular word. In the states where I’m from it’s a very not okay thing to say to a trans person and just about everyone knows they shouldn’t use it. However given the context of this chapter and how things have been going yes, Skippy did not mean it maliciously it was just the only real word he knew and it slipped out, and this would be an overreaction on Titans part. So. Rewrite incoming soon.
5/30/23, 12:24 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Thank you for showing such a respect for your readership and our reactions to your work. i appreciate you for hearing us, thank you for taking our concerns for the story seriously, but i wonder if a rewrite is necessary. All characters are able to have flaws. Titan CAN make mistakes, this could be one, this chapter doesn't have to be rewritten, but it can be a showcase that Titan is just as human as anyone and he can show humility and compassion by apologizing and promising to be a better alpha to the whole pack including Skippy next time. You wrote a fantastic chapter that totally flows with what these characters WOULD DO in this situation. i absolutely stand by your original work as you have it posted. even if it makes me upset, i repeat what i said earlier, it just means that you wrote EXCELLENT characters that make us feel real empathy. I once again advocate that This chapter can stand as it does, and we can use it to build bonds between skippy where he sees that Titan, big, strong alpha himself, can be sorry. can apologize. can ask, even beg forgiveness, and be NO LESS a strong alpha for it. Show skippy how to be a better man even when at fault, while gathering him in closer to the pack. You wrote an excellent chapter, and popular or not stories are about strife and overcoming said strife, i believe that you have written an EXCELLENT conflict that these characters can overcome together. and regardless of if it causes setbacks in skippy or not, that is still more obstacles for the characters to overcome, which i see as wonderful. your decision is of course your own, and i will respect it and gleefully welcome any and all chapters you post. i just hope that our feedback hasn't caused you any upset. Thank you for such an amazing story Artemis.
5/30/23, 8:20 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) I completely agree with @[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312). I acknowledge that my reaction is effected by living in a country in which you will never hear this term. Not knowing the full severity of this word have probably made me more forgiving than a reader from an English speaking country, which hurt the idea you were trying to pass. However, Mind Labyrinth had put it excellently. Asking for forgiveness is not weakness and learning so would do great for Skippy. Also, Learning that even Titan is still human might bring them more close together. He won't be the strict, all knowing mastermind anymore. Instead he would be a loving fatherly human being who wants the best for his pack and will do anything for them, which is far greater.
Anonymous
5/31/23, 2:16 AM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) I agree with your point. @Alpha Artemis I'm sorry if my comments made you feel uncomfortable, I appreciate your vision and creativity, it's what Mind Labyrinth say. I won't say more, in order to not make you feel unconfortable, pal, sorry.
5/31/23, 3:29 AM
@Anonymous O no your fine. I appreciate the feedback. I really do. It’s making me think a lot.
5/31/23, 3:38 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Eh, Titan went overboard without investigating the situation but people _do_ do that. I'd just roll with it and have Titan cool off a bit, think it over, and apologize for punishing without knowing what the circumstances were. That's what a good parent would do anyway. The bad ones, of course, are always "right" no matter what and their children are gaslit and terrorized into accepting they were at fault no matter what. Obviously Skippy isn't a child but he is being regressed by this family so they'll have to take that into account.
Hazard0707
6/3/23, 5:03 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree. Instead of rewriting just continue with a cool down.
Mar 23, 2021
6/3/23, 4:40 PM
Wow! Just found this story. It's incredible. Didn't realize this type of premise would be so hot!! Cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank you Elmara for introducing me to the world of dumb jocks :)
May 25, 2023
6/3/23, 5:10 AM
Not me, found the image online.Have asked around but no one know where it is from.
Jun 1, 2023
6/2/23, 10:52 PM
Hi, on sofurry is a side Story to the meta universe. [Meta universe side storys](https://www.sofurry.com/browse/search?search=Meta+side) Lex
Jun 1, 2023
Anonymous
6/2/23, 10:14 PM
Woah Leo Todrius’ META series! Haven’t finished reading but hopefully Dr Julian appears :3
May 28, 2023
6/2/23, 9:42 PM
I really love this story and its chapters. The comments on this chapters are also very interesting. I agree with the fact that Titan is going too far and also agree that rewriting it is not necessary. As it has been pointed out, people make mistakes, especially fictive ones. The way I see it, Skippy received a homophobic and transphobic upbringing, by his family and/or society. He doesn't know better. Yet. I think he will get better with help from the pack. He already is getting better. Alpha Artemis : Thanks for writing this story. It is one of my favorite. (And thanks for recurring reminder of who is who, I tend to get lost when there are too many characters.)
May 30, 2023
Anonymous
6/2/23, 12:08 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter! I wonder what Dexter will do to Brad and also to Chad and Brads father who’ll come back with changed sons.
Sep 10, 2020
6/2/23, 3:09 AM
I'd love to join rob as one of brutes slaves
Jan 24, 2023
6/1/23, 10:45 PM
The work-out scene and the bondage that follows it were exceptional pieces of writing. There was plenty of detail which gave it an aura of authenticity, yet the reader does not get distracted by the details. The character development for Marcus and Stanley moves ahead -- relentlessly. I am in awe of your skills, Puff. And I am a sucker for an S/M author who takes time to describe how things smell. Your work smells more than most. ;-) Now as to the issue of the morality of Marcus, our main character, I am not as distressed by him as are some readers. Somehow I never was. (Maybe its my sadistic side coming out.) There is no more malignant behavior in Marcus than there is in an average antagonist in a "Law and Order" or "The Blacklist" episode. Of course, we have to assume that this is being read by a reasonably discerning adult audience -- just like we do with a TV later night program. Every chapter reveals some small trait of Marcus' personality, which makes him like most humans -- a mystery both fascinating and terrible. I'd like to know if Marcus is an alter-ego for you Puff, or a combination of men you have known (or want to know) in real life? Whoever he may be, I have always sensed that there is something quite likable about him. I'd like to hang out with Marcus if he were a real guy and rummage around with him in the dark corners of my fantasies. Puff, I know that you are not telling us everything about Marcus for reasons that you have chosen to uncover only in small pieces. I wait for a revelation that shows him to be better than he appears. Proof of my intuition here stems from the deep seated friendship that Stanley exhibits toward him, time and time again. While evil is attractive, here's a case where Stanley is somehow not converted to evil when he is with Marcus. Hypnotism and "Moth to the Flame" do not seem to be adequate explanations. Beside the obvious benefits of friendship, both men are changing each other in ways that helps them grow into a deep and weird love. Can't think of too many other stories of this genre that are driven by such a well articulated character progression.
Jun 18, 2022
6/1/23, 7:07 AM
The persona of Markus and Stanley are not just one dimensional, they exhibit layers of complex emotions. That kind of exposition is rare on this site. Nice writing, Puff.