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Steve
6/5/23, 1:59 PM
Jack. You did it again. The power you have with words. You have a real talent, and surely the brain and attitude behind it too. I appreciated the insight into Sammy’s background, and seeing his take on it. This was another great chapter to another great story, thank You!
6/5/23, 7:27 AM
Of course this a reread for me. As I have several times before, when a story reads as good or better the second time it means the writer is a very gifted as here.

6/5/23, 12:00 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) So much love man.
6/5/23, 11:14 AM
Jack, Sammy has simply told Pete that he is waiting. Will Pete make him wait long? Jack, you always make the reader happy.
6/5/23, 8:26 AM
I loved the bit where the general was converted and now wears a green rubber suit and is now the tactical drone of i hope will be the new order for humans

6/5/23, 8:41 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Glad you enjoyed!
6/5/23, 8:21 AM
Exploded twice during reading haha. When can we expect the next part of this masterpiece hehe?

6/5/23, 8:38 AM
@[Rubberboy229](/user/show/304348) Idk about any masterpices but hopefully next week. Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
6/5/23, 6:36 AM
Wait...so if Ethan destroyed the crown, making the hive loyal to nothing but itself...does that mean the real Kings of Rubber were the drones we made along the way? :thinking: To be honest, there was a part of me that was miffed at that cheap fakeout with Ethan not actually being converted after all, but the rest of the chapter was just so good I didn't really care by the end. This _is_ the end, right? That misguided "hero" Derek was apprehended by the drones before he could do anything foolish and everyone in the world got to experience the mindless bliss of submitting to the unstoppable rubber collective, living muskily ever after? :stuck_out_tongue: I kid...mostly, but it really does almost work as-is if you don't mind dark endings. Hell, it wouldn't even be the darkest on this site by a decent margin. My dick wouldn't complain, even if my heart might crack a little.

6/5/23, 7:02 AM
@Anonymous To be continued, my friend. But the ending will be bittersweet, i think. The fake out was supposed to have some more concrete aspects to it. like Ethan would wake up to discover that there was rubber slowly spreading up his body and that he and Derek had only a few hours to find a cure. But as this series is more or less fluide until now, That part of the stroy (in this version anyway) was changed.
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:36 AM
Nice chapter as always. Now that Todd wasn't in control and was converted, Ethan and Eli also turned into a drone with the younger having the crown on the knee, that leaves only Derek to save the day now. Hopefully Derek would found a solution to save his lover, and stop the conversion of rubber drone, giving the two lover a happy ending.

6/5/23, 6:15 AM
@Anonymous Hopefully the ending will be satisfying. I've had it rattling around my head for weeks now and im excited to put it to page! Thanks for reading!
6/4/23, 5:24 PM
The sign of a good story is when the second read is better than the first . I feel for Matt, his kindness caused him dearly. Will Master give him a second chance and better yet will Matt become the slave trainer he needs to be. As always this is your story to do as you will. As to Jake, there he will be tamed in the end, I have no doubt or won't he?
6/4/23, 12:54 PM
I really hope you continue writing. This is a great first chapter!
6/3/23, 10:46 PM
I am glad to be wrong. This is way better. Instead of being clever to use the hunt to his advantage, Matt aimed too high. Seems Master Gabe and Billy are going to have more direct influence on training Jake. That's going to be one hell of a ride.

6/4/23, 10:07 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) It was only natural for Jake to meet the man pulling the strings behind the curtain. Now Jake’s going to have to deal with the Master’s wrath