Recent Comments

6/17/25, 1:02 PM
Just a stunning story man. I deliberately took my time and made the story last because I didn’t want it to end. Maybe add some new characters for next part or series? Maybe Milo has a brother with the same gift and transforms others? Maybe Joey has a cousin or brother who comes to visit and gets in deep with Milo or Axel? How does Marcus further descend into mindless adoration?

6/18/25, 10:55 AM
@[Sinatraguy74](/user/show/10007968) Thanks for writing, and I hope you revisit it as often as you want to relive it! I'm not sure I'll continue this exact story but hearing all these comments is giving me some ideas (Milo ordering the football team to all wear pink panties for him keeps popping into my mind), and I would LOVE to write a story about two controllers competing over the same thralls with their powers, thanks for making me think of that!
6/17/25, 11:46 AM
Hot story, but I am 90% sure this was written with AI. Am I wrong?

6/18/25, 10:51 AM
@[Btmboy64](/user/show/10049322) Hey, thanks for reading it, and thinking it's hot. I used SudoWrite for some of it. My feelings with AI right now are that it's okay to create the basic outline, as long as I go back and revise it to make sure it has my voice in it (Any tool that means I don't need to edit my writing until 4am is something I'm going to explore)
6/17/25, 5:04 AM
Great story! I love a slowly corrupted narrator who realizes something is amiss even as he is drawn inexorably into the power of the villain. You've got a great sense of pace, keeping the tension high while still getting into the thoughts of the narrator and fleshing out minor side characters. The scene with milo and the RA was a great touch. It reminds me of some of my favorite stories on this site: Master of the House, Bolshoi Papa, Tel Aviv, and Blind Spot.

6/18/25, 10:48 AM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) Thank you for the kind comment! Yeah, I'll just say this has been a fantasy of mine for a long while now, so I'm glad people are responding to it. I haven't read all of those stories yet, I guess I have to now thanks to you!
6/18/25, 12:48 AM
Great buildup to the action. I don’t always get hard reading erotic stories but this certainly brought things up. Wished it were me affected by the pheromones. Good job!

6/18/25, 6:33 AM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) Haha, I feel you on that second to last sentence. Really glad you enjoyed the story!
Anonymous
6/17/25, 9:58 PM
Love it. Can’t wait for more from you.

6/17/25, 11:01 PM
@Anonymous I look forward to providing it!
Ithalo
6/17/25, 10:58 PM
Beautiful message from Brazil to the wonderful Noah: menino se eu te pego eu sento tanto nesse seu pau rosado q vc vai gemer tão alto q o som vai ultrapassar a estratosfera vc é um filho da puta tão gostoso que dá vontade de sentar tão forte q quem conseguir me tirar de cima de vc vai ser nomeado o novo rei arthur
Ithalo
6/17/25, 2:07 AM
I can't stop thinking about these two 💦

6/17/25, 7:25 PM
@Ithalo me either tbh lmaoooo
Ithalo
6/17/25, 4:13 PM
well, i can say that my pre loved this chapter. Can’t wait to read the others

6/17/25, 7:24 PM
@Ithalo i’m sure the rest of you will like it even more
6/17/25, 4:34 AM
Really enjoyed this whole series; Jake’s backstory was perfectly set up.

6/17/25, 8:43 AM
@[mocigarbro](/user/show/10063637) Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Elm
6/17/25, 2:59 AM
What a great story, the way John toys with Chris is what I've always dreamed of doing. Truly amazing! 😍