Recent Comments

6/12/23, 9:04 AM
First of all, I would like to congratulate you for writing, in my humble opinion, the best story in a series (at least among those that are being updated frequently), which is perhaps not worth much because many do not complete the stories unfortunately, but it definitely does because this is your first story and you write it so well. You convey the voices of the characters well, to the point that it is easy to differentiate the characters and your narrative is solid and in this chapter it was especially good, you managed to advance three plots in just one chapter and in a way that made sense. That said, I think there are divergences in expectations of what you write and what I believe the community expects based on the different feedback from the last few chapters. I, for one, thought that while Dexter rationally acknowledged that Cody is the best-looking guy in school (he's a very smart person after all), he had a much bigger crush on Rich, who is a handsome competitive athlete, "perfect" (in Dexter's own words) seemingly good-natured (Despite what Cody thinks, I theorize that Rich just seems like someone pressured, probably by his father, to be the best at every activity of his.) and hard-working enough to get grades as good as Dexter himself, instead of just being a hot, charming asshole like Cody. I'm saying this because, although like many I wouldn't conduct Dexter's modus operandi and his decisions the same way you do, I fully trust your ability to continue this story in the best way, as your responses to the questions in the first comments were very satisfactory. For me, even I don't agree 100% with them. I eagerly await the next chapter. Best Wishes.
6/11/23, 9:50 PM
Loving this story! Keep it up!
Leo
6/11/23, 9:31 AM
This is so hot! One of the best stories I’ve seen on here in a LONG TIME. Please hypnotize Brad and Chad’s dad!! We desperately need a daddy slave!
6/11/23, 6:44 AM
Hi guys! Thanks again for everyone who left a comment. Much appreciated! I have to prepare for a test so I don't know if I can spend time this week for the next chapter. It might come out near the end of the month. I normally don't like to address suggestions since it might spoil the next chapters, but here are some that I'd like to comment on. 1) I did consider turning Brad's home into the HQ for their porn operations, but given that Dexter is looking forward for a university life outside his home town, I think it is a bit out of character. Maybe there's another way they can be together wherever Dexter goes? 2) Dexter did not hypnotize Justin because he's the only person he considers his equal, and tampering with his will contradicts that. Justin still does not know how Dexter hypnotized those boys, he just knows they are hypnotized, so he doesn't really pose a threat yet. And a struggle-for-control type story sounds complicated. I would not attempt that on my first try. 3) Dexter's parents not having sex is not part of the original set of commands Brad was programmed with. It was added when Dexter saw that Brad's inclusion may cause some problems within the family. If, however, he was convinced that Brad having a threesome with his parents can be good for their marriage, he just might revoke that restriction. Is a threesome involving a straight woman and a still-straight man something the community even want?
6/11/23, 3:40 AM
Omg I’m loving this! Just joined and binged! Amazing
James
6/11/23, 2:37 AM
Damn, where's a werewolf when I want one.
6/10/23, 11:22 PM
Swimmy headed skippy. Yay. And i like that Oak, though hurt, recognizes that skippy needs care too. Cant wait to read the rest!
6/10/23, 11:02 PM
Very well written and absolutely loved the build up and climax! 10 out of 10 for me
6/10/23, 6:41 PM
W H O L E S O M E
6/10/23, 9:06 AM
Oh great. Yet another story predicated on perpetual "victimhood" and revenge. Yawn.

6/10/23, 4:29 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) Uncalled for. Not every story is going to push your buttons and no one is making you read things that aren't to your liking. I'd challenge you to write something yourself, but I think your time would be better spent examining why you would choose to piss on someone's parade like this.

6/10/23, 6:01 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) Find a new hobby. Being a story troll is unwanted and unwelcome.