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6/13/23, 2:29 AM
Yay! You’re back! Made me so happy to see this update!
6/13/23, 2:05 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
6/13/23, 1:55 AM
Oh gods it’s so hot please let 005 and 013 be a couple
6/12/23, 11:39 PM
They have evened the scales and see each other for what they are: slaves. Its a humbling moment. Ans well written. I have no doubt that Gabe will be keeping both of them on 'short leashes' as it were. And Billy will always be there to provide that extra torment. He is devious wild card. And thank you for the longevity of these series so far. And thank you for being so consistent in providing the next chapter! Its really appreciated!
6/12/23, 8:27 PM
Yes, I can see that. Pure evil!
6/12/23, 8:10 PM
For me this was what I was hoping for a relationship between Matt & Jake. However, I still want Matt to be Jake's slave trainer & get his chance to fuck Jake. Also Billy is a sick pervert & for me has no redeeming value. Any chance he will get his comeuppance? I almost forgot to thank you for this great chapter.

6/12/23, 8:23 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Jake is really starting to Dee a whole different side of Matt, realising he’s one of the few people who sees him as more than just fuck meat. I see where you’re coming from here about Billy. But he was a helluva fun character to write up
6/12/23, 5:18 PM
I always enjoy when you post a new story. Great job
6/12/23, 9:04 AM
First of all, I would like to congratulate you for writing, in my humble opinion, the best story in a series (at least among those that are being updated frequently), which is perhaps not worth much because many do not complete the stories unfortunately, but it definitely does because this is your first story and you write it so well. You convey the voices of the characters well, to the point that it is easy to differentiate the characters and your narrative is solid and in this chapter it was especially good, you managed to advance three plots in just one chapter and in a way that made sense. That said, I think there are divergences in expectations of what you write and what I believe the community expects based on the different feedback from the last few chapters. I, for one, thought that while Dexter rationally acknowledged that Cody is the best-looking guy in school (he's a very smart person after all), he had a much bigger crush on Rich, who is a handsome competitive athlete, "perfect" (in Dexter's own words) seemingly good-natured (Despite what Cody thinks, I theorize that Rich just seems like someone pressured, probably by his father, to be the best at every activity of his.) and hard-working enough to get grades as good as Dexter himself, instead of just being a hot, charming asshole like Cody. I'm saying this because, although like many I wouldn't conduct Dexter's modus operandi and his decisions the same way you do, I fully trust your ability to continue this story in the best way, as your responses to the questions in the first comments were very satisfactory. For me, even I don't agree 100% with them. I eagerly await the next chapter. Best Wishes.
6/11/23, 9:50 PM
Loving this story! Keep it up!
Leo
6/11/23, 9:31 AM
This is so hot! One of the best stories I’ve seen on here in a LONG TIME. Please hypnotize Brad and Chad’s dad!! We desperately need a daddy slave!