Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/4/26, 7:12 AM
One of the hottest chapters so far! Very well written. Would be so hot if Noah shaved liam and force him to wear skimpy panties or chastity

3/4/26, 5:03 PM
@Anonymous keep reading i have a feeling itll happen lmao
3/4/26, 4:50 AM
this is your hottest fucking story yet. Love the small penis humiliation

3/4/26, 5:02 PM
@[Jack Dudina](/user/show/2091159) ikrrr hot af
3/3/26, 10:46 PM
This is a masterpiece in storytelling!

3/4/26, 5:02 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) dude thanks
3/4/26, 10:27 AM
GH 1130750 GPSH 4658 @Gilgamesh: NO mythic character is easy to get. Obsidian Seph is also one of my favourites, but I don't have him yet. Count on 700-800 fists plus 5 Sandalwood perfumes.
3/4/26, 4:54 AM
would be so hot if liam actually had to wear panties next chapter...
3/3/26, 9:34 PM
WOW! What a fantastic chapter. The story just gets better and better. The way Matthew is taking complete control of Jordan is so detailed and trance inducing. Each paragraph you take us down along with him, making us experience his submission. My cock is pulsing along with every detail. So well written and erotic. Thank you for explaining about the rubber layering. I was wondering about it too. In one word: Hot!
3/2/26, 6:39 PM
Such a big muscle guy, yet so naively dumb and innocent. May he be so throughly corrupted that he becomes something very different.

3/3/26, 4:21 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) He will be less naïve by the time the carnival leaves town. He will still be one of the biggest horndogs in town, however.
3/1/26, 10:14 PM
OHHH, so fucking hoooot!!!! And the build up for this moment was delicious! Colt isn't the only one who ended up a little dehydrated here, there's so much to like on this chapter, buddy! The descriptions, the humiliation, the mockery, the copious mentions to boots, cowboys, sweat and manly men... Wooof. My imagination was set ablaze by the hunters and all their interactions and dialogues with Colt. And every time someone mentions how dumb the protagonist is, an angel gets its wings, lol. Extra points for slowly turning **Colt** into a **dolt**, ha ha! I love that he takes the spur comment literally and yet he thinks he said something clever :smile: :satisfied: :laughing:

3/3/26, 4:18 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Haha! I'm so gal you had fun with it! Colt is a big clueless country boy. His world is small, but his visits to the carnival over the course of a week, are definitely going to, uh, expand his horizons. He is very aware of how hot he is. He just has no idea of what thoughts he stirs in the minds of some of the locals! He is going to find out. :smiling_imp:
Anonymous
3/3/26, 7:10 AM
Loved the slow burn. I almost feel sorry for the stud cowboy. Almost.

3/3/26, 4:11 PM
@Anonymous Glad you like it! Yeah, I'm right there with you. I almost feel sorry, but the big stud himself is feeling kind of surprised by his reactions to what is happening... like maybe he was made for this.
3/2/26, 1:15 AM
Wow! That cowboy is going to have such a fun time! And I'm going to live reading each chapter of it. Personally, I hope these new nicknames from stallion, pony, and bull are all foreshadowing. It would be incredible to read about this muscle stud getting geared up as a one. A full reversal of his profession.

3/3/26, 4:08 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks! Glad you are liking the story. As for an y foreshadowing in the names, Colt may very well get saddled and harnessed in the future. We shall see....