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6/15/23, 6:13 AM
You threw me with the term: BEANIE. I've always thought that BEANIE was a kid's cap or a woman's hat. But I see that in some parts of the world, BEANIE is the word that we in the States might call a SKULL CAP or a WATCH CAP.
6/13/23, 1:53 AM
Yes! Yes! Fucking Yes! I've been waiting for this! And this was just as good as the previous chapters. And I really like where the next chapter is heading. I will try and reframe from theories or suggestions. Your work in this series has been some of the best it has read of this rubber superhero genre. I really look forward to your next chapter.

6/13/23, 6:27 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks so much for the comment! Go ahead with the theories! I love them, and they help me organise my ideas a bit better. If you have any specific comments or critiques, comment them, or message me on discord.

6/15/23, 12:27 AM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Well thank you for the invite. I will start with one criticism for this chapter. Just after Luxor tries to go to the gym there feels like some time dilation occurs. How soon had he stepped out to when Jamie had to be stuck in the latex for 15 minutes? It doesn't feel like it adds up. As to theories and questions it has about the upcoming chapter. The sudden and timely coincidence of Jamie offering to go to the gym with Luxor just after his forced conditioning does imply that the symbiote got him to do that. Which is backed by the fact the gym is a place Myriad controls. And that Alex is there. Another thought/theory is how much Alex will work them both? Or will he largely focus on Luxor? Also I have been curious about the musk/scent kink growing in Luxor. Its clearly from the symbiote he doesn't know he has on him, but to what end? Does Myriad plan on having him as a type of hound? Or is this a more repressed kink that is being brought to light? But on the other hand, how can Alex be equipped to begin influencing Luxor to begin with? What exploits does he know? What information did he get from DT-X? This could be a great chance for the shapeshifter to come into play. Have him be a second Alex or even a Midnight (human version) would have its benefits. But they have a month of house arrest. So things can't go too fast. So the question is how covertly can Myriad operate in getting both heroes to convert?
6/14/23, 11:04 PM
One of the best chapters yet ❤️
6/14/23, 9:03 PM
Love to hear more about how they put the baby to sleep. Do they do it with Hypnosis or do they do it with some sleep medication so that the baby sleeps all through the night.
6/14/23, 4:40 PM
This is so much fun!
6/14/23, 6:09 AM
Fantastic story line and writing. Dont stop!
Alex Lat
6/14/23, 2:04 AM
As I was missing your publications, seeing a new post was exciting, and seeing jaime's relationship with 13 too, I thought it was very cute, I hope they can be friends

6/14/23, 4:07 AM
@[Alex Lat](/user/show/161881) NOT EVEN ABOUT 013 I WANT JAMIE TO BANG DUSK LITERALLY NEXT CHAPTER :smirk: :smirk: :smirk:
Anonymous
6/14/23, 3:13 AM
Alex: Can't wait to get started on your full induction, cutie :wink: Me: Stop, just stop, he's already zonked :sob:
Anonymous
6/14/23, 12:12 AM
who wants to bet that we already know who "Alex" is :wink:
6/13/23, 10:03 PM
one theory I have is about Kane: I think that we can see how in chapter 5, Master and Luxor's band both see how Jamie's weakness is how alone and vulnerable he feels. This is really big material, as we can see 013 remedying that (which honestly I'm not surprised if Jamie accepts dronification, there's almost nothing left for him to lose being in the League) now Kane, we see that he has a lot of weaknesses that are kind of subtle, yet really deep! If master can coordinate Alex and Luxor's latex drop to manipulate his desires, and offer a solution, then we may see DS-014 very very soon. . . As for ideas on *how* Master could exploit his weaknesses? I think that Kane is secretly incredibly insecure, and wants approval from higher authority. Maybe it's because he grew up insanely rich and well prepared, so he kind of knows that what he has is not really earned. Maybe that's why he seeks approval and attention from Valour, his parents, and even some jealousy from Midnight treating him "only" equally! My theory, and provably not real, is that Kane will seek to be strong, and as it is revealed just how strong Jamie is, he will feel hopeless. And in the dark void that is ennui, Master will offer a solution to cure him. For Luxor to be a new hero, sparkling with new powers, and enrobed in latex. . .