Recent Comments

Alex Lat
6/14/23, 2:04 AM
As I was missing your publications, seeing a new post was exciting, and seeing jaime's relationship with 13 too, I thought it was very cute, I hope they can be friends

6/14/23, 4:07 AM
@[Alex Lat](/user/show/161881) NOT EVEN ABOUT 013 I WANT JAMIE TO BANG DUSK LITERALLY NEXT CHAPTER :smirk: :smirk: :smirk:
Anonymous
6/14/23, 3:13 AM
Alex: Can't wait to get started on your full induction, cutie :wink: Me: Stop, just stop, he's already zonked :sob:
Anonymous
6/14/23, 12:12 AM
who wants to bet that we already know who "Alex" is :wink:
6/13/23, 10:03 PM
one theory I have is about Kane: I think that we can see how in chapter 5, Master and Luxor's band both see how Jamie's weakness is how alone and vulnerable he feels. This is really big material, as we can see 013 remedying that (which honestly I'm not surprised if Jamie accepts dronification, there's almost nothing left for him to lose being in the League) now Kane, we see that he has a lot of weaknesses that are kind of subtle, yet really deep! If master can coordinate Alex and Luxor's latex drop to manipulate his desires, and offer a solution, then we may see DS-014 very very soon. . . As for ideas on *how* Master could exploit his weaknesses? I think that Kane is secretly incredibly insecure, and wants approval from higher authority. Maybe it's because he grew up insanely rich and well prepared, so he kind of knows that what he has is not really earned. Maybe that's why he seeks approval and attention from Valour, his parents, and even some jealousy from Midnight treating him "only" equally! My theory, and provably not real, is that Kane will seek to be strong, and as it is revealed just how strong Jamie is, he will feel hopeless. And in the dark void that is ennui, Master will offer a solution to cure him. For Luxor to be a new hero, sparkling with new powers, and enrobed in latex. . .
Anonymous
6/13/23, 12:31 PM
Best story in all of GSS Martin can vouch ;5
Anonymous
6/13/23, 10:47 AM
Very appropriate title: how far the mighty have fallen! I too am enjoying this very much. I keep reminding myself that Billy WAS, at some point, a VICTIM -- Jake's VICTIM. I would LOVE to see a flashback of that exact moment. I want to see when Billy turned from a willing participant (he must've been at some point), to the point when he said 'enough' but Jake didn't listen, to the point that he vowed to take vengeance on Jake to meticulously plan his downfall. Without these background for me, Billy is just annoying after he pop Jake's cherry. Just my take.

6/13/23, 12:03 PM
@Anonymous I do get what you mean. Billy has taken his to a whole other level. This has always been Jake…and now Matt’s story and I’ll probably stick with that for now, but Ia spinoff/flashback tale is definitely something to consinder
Boomer
6/13/23, 11:38 AM
Yesss been waiting for this. Genuinely the best story on here - plenty of plot without sacrificing sexiness, and perfect justification for why a drone life sounds like heaven
6/13/23, 4:28 AM
Absolutely lovely and I am happy to see the story continue!
6/13/23, 3:11 AM
I love Jamie's dream sequence at the beginning. I wonder if Master used the actual memories of DH-03 to form the dream? We get to see a Brute in action for the first time. We also get hints of two new drones types - DCs and DGs. Then there's that great "daily conditioning" sequence. The rest is exposition and setup, but good lead in to what's to come. Yet another superb chapter.
6/13/23, 2:29 AM
Yay! You’re back! Made me so happy to see this update!