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6/16/23, 7:43 AM
I'm still holding out some degree of hope that Sammy's own interest in Pete is at least a little stronger than Sammy anticipated.

6/16/23, 5:12 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Sammy, at the end of the day, is still just a teenage boy. He might not be as smart as he thinks :)

6/16/23, 6:13 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) You don't say.... :smiling_imp:
6/14/23, 11:06 PM
This was completely remarkable. Literary in tone and a fantastic amount of world-building. And I definitely saw the Altered Carbon nods.

6/16/23, 11:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you so much, that's hugely encouraging to us both! Actually, we have some plans to eventually do some rewriting of about the first 8 chapters to smooth a few things and maybe add a bit more here and there. Probably after the next chapter we publish!
6/16/23, 6:09 AM
Dang, Jack. You know how much I love this story. The pictures really add a whole new level to the story. I'm digging how the whole story arc ties into what we know about Sammy and about Eden. Don't stop.
rwriter51
6/16/23, 1:41 AM
You always have such interesting twists and turns in the plot. That's what keeps me coming back for more, that and Sammy Parker's little dick. :laughing:

6/16/23, 1:51 AM
@[rwriter51](/user/show/10008532) yeah it's tragic what he has to work with :)
AgentCoyner
6/16/23, 1:39 AM
I've never been into rubber very much but this is _super fucking hot_. I can't wait to read the next part!!
6/15/23, 8:10 PM
Please don’t tell me this is the end 😭😭😭. Good chapter as always, your writing is perfect.

6/15/23, 8:11 PM
@[Angel πŸ˜‡](/user/show/10027188) Nope just the first story arc

6/16/23, 12:15 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) thank the Good Lord.
6/15/23, 10:47 PM
Definitely seeing the start to some ulterior motives from the dad. Liking it.
6/15/23, 9:49 PM
Interesting turn of events. I’m excited to see what comes next.
6/15/23, 8:44 PM
I absolutely adore the slow-burn nature of this. The imagery is amazing, and the little hints of what is to come are so titillating. Just fantastic.
6/15/23, 8:42 PM
I was eagerly waiting for the next chapter this week and it didn’t come! Glad I read through the comments. Good luck on exams!