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6/20/23, 10:57 AM
I so love when these erotic stories manage to be literary as well, and you're one of the best here at doing that. Hot _and_ well written? More of that kind of thing, please! :D

6/20/23, 4:39 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) What a huge compliment! Thank you so much! I know that my stories tend to be paced a little slower than most on here, so it is great to hear that what I'm aiming for story-wise is working for you! 💖
Anonymous
6/20/23, 8:55 AM
If anyone has suggestions or things they want to see happen in future chapters leave a comment. Gonna be a long series
6/5/23, 3:50 AM
Damn Megan Fox would make such a phenomenal mistress… I love the idea of Pete taking MGK’s key too

Anonymous
6/20/23, 8:54 AM
@[BoyEdgedDeniedLocked](/user/show/10020809) Dw that’s coming. I have some ideas I’m working with for where to take it.. but the next section is gonna be the night ending with MGK getting one last chance to unlock by getting Pete to agree whoever is bigger keeps the other key. He loses and Pete teases him as MGK watches his cock size and ego shrink along with his size
6/18/23, 1:36 PM
I continue to be delighted with this and hope you continue this amazing story into the future. I especially loved Julian and Nova's predicament and Julian's conversion to Jewel, and hope for much more on those lines in the future! I don't mean to try to guide the story, just to say what hit best for me here. :)

6/20/23, 3:23 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you! We're both so glad to know you've been enjoying this. We're actually working on the next chapter and have just a few more scenes left to write for it, so definitely more to come, though I can't say how soon! (There are definitely more training scenes in the wings for Nova, who hasn't had hardly any yet, and probably Jewel too!)
6/19/23, 9:19 PM
Extremely hot so far! Judging from the tags, I surely hope there will be more shenanigans and plot twists!
6/19/23, 4:08 PM
So will Jake be sold or like Callum become Matt's play thing and slave. Ihope the latter & Matt does love him as does Jake love Matt as much as they can.

6/19/23, 4:28 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Only time will tell I’m afraid, but we’re getting closer to finding out
Ayebarra
6/19/23, 1:45 PM
Hope there will be updates soon! This was a good story and looking forward to reading more. Thank you!
6/19/23, 5:22 AM
Suuuuuuuuper hot!! I can't wait to see Eli's punishment. It could be an interesting chance to see more of his dynamic with Mac... After all, doctors are rather infamous for their disdain for nurses, so I wonder what the uncle could really think of his haughty, prick nephew? I also assume Vince is somehow going to work his way around to controlling Sam, especially now that he knows what's going on under the Kingstons' roof and could cause him some serious trouble? Given that he's such an unrepentant prick for even pettier reasons than the other men in his life, I wonder if he could present the perfect opportunity for Vince to acquire a guinea pig that he doesn't feel too bad about really screwing with and really testing the limits of his program? Ah, the possibilities! I also wanted to say that this story otherwise has been a really pleasant suprise (aside from it being blisteringly hot!). I'm not usually into emotional intimacy where mind control is concerned, but you've really managed to incorporate it into your story in a way that I feel adds to the hotness, and I guess the overall depravity. Really hope you'll be continuing the story, Blackjinx123!
6/18/23, 2:33 PM
So, Kane is wrong in his assertion that Jamie didn't deny that Midnight was his boyfriend. Jamie did flat out deny that. However, he's correct to suspect that Jamie is protecting Master Myriad, because Jamie actually is protecting Master. We don't know if this is a conscious or unconscious choice on Jamie's part, or some kind of compulsion put in place by Master and enforced by 013, or 013 on its own subtly preventing him from betraying Master. The fact is that at this point, Jamie is protecting Master. Jamie's memories have returned, and he is experiencing Master's and 013's concerted efforts to persuade him to become a loyal DS. He knows more about Master and his operation than anyone in the League. The information he could give them might be the difference between defeat and victory for the League. Yet, it doesn’t seem to have even occured to him to tell them what's happening to him, and what he knows about Master and his Network, at least from what we see of his internal monologue. So what's going on there? There are several possibilities. It could be that he is so off-kilter right now that he hasn't even had a chance to think about it. It could be a conscious or unconscious choice made as a function of his instinct for self-preservation. Let's face it, if he somehow manages to spill all, the League is unlikely to give him the honor he'd deserve for doing it, and quite likely to send him to the Tomb. It could be that Master and/or 013 are exerting a subtle influence that restrains him, and keeps him from even thinking about telling Master's secrets to the League. In any case, given what 013 revealed about its imperatives, and the level of control 013 can exert over Jamie even now, I'd say that 013 would do whatever it takes to stop Jamie from confessing. Allowing it would place both Jamie and Master in severe danger, and violate both of 013's prime directives. So, what do you think about why Jamie is remaining silent?

Anonymous
6/18/23, 5:13 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) a side tangent, i think that perhaps Midnight, now Dusk, actually did have intense feelings for jamie, like in chapter 1, so i think Kane is right but not in the way he assumes= and also i think that with how Master was able to whisper jamie "good superdrone" using his own voice, i think that they are hijacking his subconscious, corrupting him slowly to the other latex side

6/18/23, 6:20 PM
@Anonymous I suspect you are right about Midnight, and Jamie's feelings may be more intense than he recognizes. But Jamie is very clear that they were just friends and not in any sense a couple. As for Master influencing Jamie's subconscious, Master has too much on his plate to spend any serious time doing that, though if he could blur Jamie's memories, it's likely he could have inserted a post-hypnotic suggestion. And this Chapter does open with Master (or one of his minions) sending Jamie a dream. And then of course, 013 resides in Jamie's head. 013 can certainly engage Jamie's conscious mind. Why wouldn't he be able to influence his subconscious as well? Assuming DS-013 will be like Horizon and the other DSs, 013 and Jamie will ultimately be one merged entity without any noticeable separation between them.

Anonymous
6/18/23, 9:18 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Who knows maybe the 005 symbiote manipulates 013 to make Jamie love Dusk

6/18/23, 11:09 PM
@Anonymous Probably won't be necessary. I think those two will be as close as Master allows.
6/18/23, 6:36 PM
Fantastic writing, as always! I hope you continue this series. Maybe on your Patreon, if not here?