Recent Comments

6/16/25, 2:12 AM
Onr of the few times I'll actually comment on a story because holy shit this was hot! Love it from the main idea down to the small details of how Joey sees everything go down. Would love to see if and how you'll expand on this, because personally I'd love to see what really went down on the camping trip. But that's if you really want to write that or if you want to keep that vague. Good job!

6/16/25, 9:42 PM
@[MindManiac](/user/show/56719) Thanks for the comment, it means a lot! Not sure, this one might be done, but I'm up for any inspiration for what readers want to see next.
6/15/25, 10:44 PM
This was excellent! Exceptionally well-written from the dialogue to the descriptions to Joey's inner thoughts. Very well done, you should be proud! I can't wait to see who actually wrote this and see what else you may have written!

6/16/25, 9:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks for the reply! Without spoiling it, I've written some stuff before but this was the first, purely M/M-MC story I've written. It means a lot that you and others were so receptive to it.
6/15/25, 9:36 PM
Can't wait for more

6/16/25, 9:39 PM
@Jonanator Thanks for the comment (if there was more...what were you hoping to see?)
6/15/25, 9:06 PM
The freedom that comes from surrendering to an alpha teaching you things about yourself that you didn’t even know or were afraid to see. I hope Liam transforms into a pit worshiping cock sucking piss drinking ass licking cum guzzling cumdump with a butt plug up his hungry cunt and pierced nipples and a locked cock. All under the tutelage of Noah. Love this story!

6/16/25, 11:28 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Yes, you describe exactly what I feel should happen. 🔥🔥🔥

6/16/25, 5:24 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) glad ure enjoyin it mannn and im pretty sure none of you guys will be disappointed at all! lmao
6/16/25, 12:30 AM
Such a great story

6/16/25, 1:27 AM
@Jonanator Much obliged!
6/15/25, 11:19 PM
Hot story! I am curious about the future adventures and hope you expand this story. Will Boulder mess with with Silvester's Dreams or sleepwalk Silvester?
6/15/25, 8:09 PM
This was an absolutely amazing story; it hit all the marks!! I'll definitely be checking out your future work

6/15/25, 9:29 PM
@[Smsmmw](/user/show/10004827) I’m honored by the praise! I’ve got a couple things coming down the pipeline, so I hope you’ll enjoy them too.
6/15/25, 7:54 PM
Okay, this was HOT It was well written and well done. I love how the seduction picked up the pace gradually, each step taking it's time until he became daddy's boy. I'll be eagerly waiting for your next entry :)

6/15/25, 9:27 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Hey hey, that’s exactly what I was going for! Glad it came across well. I always appreciate compliments on my writing.
6/15/25, 4:34 PM
Great first story! Loved the slow seduction from Cody turning his boy. Excited to see what you write next!

6/15/25, 9:26 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) Why thank you! I think seduction is my favorite part of smut.
6/15/25, 3:34 PM
Oi KiwiScribe. Loved this from start to finish. Vice is nice but incest is best! I wondered if the AC engineer was going to turn up unannounced, perhaps with his young apprentice, and how he'd react to seeing Michael slobbering over his daddy;s body. Poor Michael could end up as the filling in a spit-roast sandwich, he'd hate that, wouldn't he? Keep up the good work, mate

6/15/25, 9:25 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Oh yeah, I’m sure he’d just despise it. Haha. Thank you for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed my story.