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6/24/23, 4:03 PM
This was a really cool story but please tell me there are more chapters!

6/25/23, 1:45 PM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it that much!
6/25/23, 11:58 AM
Had my cock in my hand the whole time.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 9:01 AM
super hot!!! I hope that Sammy fucks maverick's tight pussy and that mav becomes Sammy's 'good girl' for the week. and Pete is forced to watch as his idol, mav, becomes Sammy's eager willing slutty pussy (since mav is staying at Pete's condo).
6/25/23, 12:35 AM
Hope exams went well but very glad you continued!
Libra
6/24/23, 8:54 PM
I never usually comment but holy shit that was hot!! It could have been me, and that made it even hotter to read :) I do hope there's more coming because I like the way you write x
Anonymous
6/24/23, 5:20 PM
This was so sexy and hot! can’t wait for the next chapter!
6/24/23, 5:12 PM
This was hot and sexy! Great chapter.
6/24/23, 5:49 AM
A very intriguing beginning to this story. I especially enjoyed the double twist at the end with the CEO's partial plan being revealed followed immediately by the technicians undermining it.

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I wasn't originally going to have the double twist. It was originally going to just be Patrick kind of screwing himself by ignoring the warnings and giving in to his desires. Sean originally only planned to do exactly what he put in the contract and offer, but he gave in to temptation at the last minute to ensure that he had complete control of Patrick. So that meant that Sean needed to be taken down a peg as well. Part of the story's intent was to illustrate how people could be corrupted by this technology, and the three technicians were not completely amoral and we know that whistleblowers are a thing so...

6/24/23, 1:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yeah, I really liked that part and thought it rang true. These technicians would have to be smart people but at the same time they don't have the kind of wealth and power that their boss has. Would they just go along with his shameless plan to enslave someone? Would you? If the opportunity presented itself to be the fly in the ointment to that kind of dastardly plan, wouldn't you do it? I think a lot of people would.
John
6/24/23, 5:14 AM
Please part 2!

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[John](/user/show/10013303) I'm glad you liked it. Since this is an anthology series, the next part I am planning to post will be its own standalone story dealing with AI. But I agree the characters are really interesting and so is the situation. I probably will revisit this a little later. Even though it's framed in a high-tech setting and gay, this is after all basically the story of a rich man paying for plastic surgery for his companion, and that is absolutely a real thing that happens which means the dramatic beats are completely valid.
Muscle-Flex
8/25/22, 3:16 AM
Oh man, that was... whew! Yeah, I have to go change my clothes now. You got me going just with Markus's outfit (and his flexing as he checked himself out in his bedroom mirror), but then the squatting scene at the gym with his now mind-warped coach.... that sealed the deal. Woof! Great job. Thanks for another installment. And of course, I can't wait to see what coach has planned next. :muscle:

8/25/22, 12:59 PM
@Muscle-Flex I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! It's been a while since I've written anything, so the writing isn't the best. But I'm really glad you liked it. Having Mark smother himself with his own filthy shirt was one of my favourite parts to write, so I'm glad that general scene was able to get you going. I plan on writing a second chapter soon, for the next part of Marks day at the gym. If you have any suggestions of what our dear mind warped coach could do to our hunky, idiot jock, then I'm all ears

6/24/23, 10:53 AM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) i really hope this is making good progress- I need thenext part :smiling_imp: