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6/25/23, 4:28 PM
A very cool idea, which I can easily see expanded in a form of a series. Well, the whole theme of "deserving victims" is very much up my alley, as then they can get punished to no limits. I must admit, I was a little lost about Tom's dick situation, initially I thought that the dick would also be available to play with, constantly bringing Tom closer to the edge, which would always evade him (as in, his dick could get turned into a dildo for public use, that's just what I imagined would be happening). I like your style, and am looking forward to future writings from you.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 2:30 PM
Wow! Great plot, great writing, I can’t wait for more. Please continue!
6/24/23, 4:03 PM
This was a really cool story but please tell me there are more chapters!

6/25/23, 1:45 PM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it that much!
6/25/23, 11:58 AM
Had my cock in my hand the whole time.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 9:01 AM
super hot!!! I hope that Sammy fucks maverick's tight pussy and that mav becomes Sammy's 'good girl' for the week. and Pete is forced to watch as his idol, mav, becomes Sammy's eager willing slutty pussy (since mav is staying at Pete's condo).
6/25/23, 12:35 AM
Hope exams went well but very glad you continued!
Libra
6/24/23, 8:54 PM
I never usually comment but holy shit that was hot!! It could have been me, and that made it even hotter to read :) I do hope there's more coming because I like the way you write x
Anonymous
6/24/23, 5:20 PM
This was so sexy and hot! can’t wait for the next chapter!
6/24/23, 5:12 PM
This was hot and sexy! Great chapter.
6/24/23, 5:49 AM
A very intriguing beginning to this story. I especially enjoyed the double twist at the end with the CEO's partial plan being revealed followed immediately by the technicians undermining it.

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I wasn't originally going to have the double twist. It was originally going to just be Patrick kind of screwing himself by ignoring the warnings and giving in to his desires. Sean originally only planned to do exactly what he put in the contract and offer, but he gave in to temptation at the last minute to ensure that he had complete control of Patrick. So that meant that Sean needed to be taken down a peg as well. Part of the story's intent was to illustrate how people could be corrupted by this technology, and the three technicians were not completely amoral and we know that whistleblowers are a thing so...

6/24/23, 1:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yeah, I really liked that part and thought it rang true. These technicians would have to be smart people but at the same time they don't have the kind of wealth and power that their boss has. Would they just go along with his shameless plan to enslave someone? Would you? If the opportunity presented itself to be the fly in the ointment to that kind of dastardly plan, wouldn't you do it? I think a lot of people would.