Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/26/23, 3:03 AM
Great concept! I really enjoyed it! Few typos/grammatical errors but that doesn’t really matter too much. Interested to see where it goes! Keep it up!
Anonymous
6/26/23, 12:29 AM
Damn. This was hot. Can't wait for a further part, maybe even having Thor be Deans bitch outside the spell

6/26/23, 1:54 AM
@Anonymous Glad you liked enjoyed! If all goes to plan this is definitely not the last you'll see of Thor, but I'm looking at this more as an anthology with each chapter focusing on a different 'main' MCU character.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 10:40 PM
It ends with "To be continued" ... I hope this is still the author's intention!
6/25/23, 9:10 PM
Loved this story, but one thing I’d suggest is giving a more detailed account of why Tom is “deserving” yes he’s a misogynist, but it is addressed near the end that he is a rapist. Since this series seems to be about truly terrible victims, you need to tell us at the start and make us believe they are terrible. Also personal input would be to add his transformation into the glory hole, but that’s preference.
6/25/23, 4:28 PM
A very cool idea, which I can easily see expanded in a form of a series. Well, the whole theme of "deserving victims" is very much up my alley, as then they can get punished to no limits. I must admit, I was a little lost about Tom's dick situation, initially I thought that the dick would also be available to play with, constantly bringing Tom closer to the edge, which would always evade him (as in, his dick could get turned into a dildo for public use, that's just what I imagined would be happening). I like your style, and am looking forward to future writings from you.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 2:30 PM
Wow! Great plot, great writing, I can’t wait for more. Please continue!
6/24/23, 4:03 PM
This was a really cool story but please tell me there are more chapters!

6/25/23, 1:45 PM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it that much!
6/25/23, 11:58 AM
Had my cock in my hand the whole time.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 9:01 AM
super hot!!! I hope that Sammy fucks maverick's tight pussy and that mav becomes Sammy's 'good girl' for the week. and Pete is forced to watch as his idol, mav, becomes Sammy's eager willing slutty pussy (since mav is staying at Pete's condo).
6/25/23, 12:35 AM
Hope exams went well but very glad you continued!