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6/27/23, 2:39 PM
You are such a good writer!! What is the read oder for your works to understand the bigger universe you are making?

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@[That one Guy you know](/user/show/10001793) Parker Brothers which includes Adventures and John's tale, Top Dawg and then Foul Ball to get the whole thing. Characters show up in Buck Stop Here but the story isn't needed to understand Eden.
CHT
6/25/23, 10:48 PM
Such a hot story .... hoping to see Pete and MGK humiliated and forced to do stuff together by Fox! great writing!

Anonymous
6/26/23, 8:14 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Thanks man, glad you’re enjoying it. If you got any suggestions or things you wanna see added lmk

6/27/23, 12:52 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) totally agree
6/27/23, 12:28 PM
Great story !!
6/26/23, 4:40 PM
Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

6/27/23, 6:03 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! Dean didn't become a sex god, at least not in a literal sense. However, he's also not fully out of the prayer's sway; he's still only had sex with 50% of the gods present after all. I did worry about the floating perspective, but I felt it was important to really get into everyones minds and show how they were being influenced. I hoped the third person omniscient narration and paragraph breaks would mellow out the oddness.
Theorizer
6/27/23, 5:35 AM
Heya it’s me and back with another theory that of Jamie and his possible future pup nature So like from chapter 4 and 5 we see that Jamie became a sort of mini pup drone because master wanted to play with him, but even after the mask was taken away, Jamie still was acting like a lil pet this puppy nature is fascinating because altheorizingly I think that it means Jamie soaked up much more from chapter 3, where the subliminal soaked into him as a primer for Master’s corruption/instruction. So I think Jamie for now on will ehibit some pup characteristics This also is kind of a tangent but the symbiote interacted and merged with Jamie while in pup mode, and jamie liked being a pup and being caressed and loved by Master and 005 midnight or Dusk; so, maybe jamie accepts his pup realignment on top of the superdrone one My prediction is that 013-to-be, can be placated by belly rubs, head scratching, hugs, sleeping together, and these are all ways master and his drones can use to convince Jamie to become a drone as part of the latex family. And who knows maybe he will puppy play date with Jack who is a “authentic” puppy drone
6/27/23, 3:15 AM
The way he uses hypnotism to enhance the experience is really quite beautiful. This is a fantastic erotic piece.
6/26/23, 11:56 AM
Amazing start, I can’t wait for more.

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Thanks for your support!
6/25/23, 5:38 AM
This is my second time reading this and if anything, it only got hotter on the re-read. I love this universe already and I can't wait to read more in it. I have to admit that, like other readers, it would be really hot to read through Patrick experiencing those changes and being molded, along with some of the aftermath. I'll be looking forward to more stories in this universe!

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you so much! Getting better on a reread is a real compliment. I think you'll be very interested in some of the other main stories in this umbrella. I have other upcoming stories that deal with bio printing, AI, artificial reality, and nanotechnology.
6/24/23, 11:20 PM
I definitely want to hear more about what happens to Patrick. You've created a very compelling future world here.

6/26/23, 3:25 PM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you! I hope you will also enjoy the other stories in the Fracture series as they will all contribute to illustrating my take on this sort of Westworld/blade runner future, just with a very gay twist.
6/26/23, 7:06 AM
That was evil! I was so close to coming, and then no joi! very well written, and I love the concept!

6/26/23, 2:47 PM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) lol I know, I know, I had to use the first chapter as set up. But don't worry plenty of fun to be had. :P Hope you enjoy the second chapter, promise it has plenty of smut.