Recent Comments

7/1/23, 3:34 PM
HOT Chapter, Supaboi! Def like the new direction of the last 2 chapters.... Can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/23, 9:50 PM
It took me a very long time to catch up to the more recent stuff, and it was very nice to see the evolution of your style. The story also went in many funny directions. 😍 I do have a problem with your overuse of capital letters, but this seems to have calmed down in recent chapters.

7/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks, Bobby!! Appreciate ALL of your comments!! My overall style continues to be "a work in progress", but hearing comments from you are certainly helpful "to hone in on my shortcomings"... I had been utilizing the capital letters mainly to demonstrate "moments of anger/domination/strength".... but I will keep your comment in mind for future chapters/stories!! Super GR8FUL that you're diggin the storyline & hope you enjoy the next chapter (which is currently in review)!! Happy 4th!:firecracker:
7/1/23, 2:46 PM
Part 2? Please 🙏
Anonymous
7/1/23, 2:22 PM
I keep on rereading, this is so lovely
7/1/23, 2:08 PM
This story needs a continuation. Itsvery detailed and so hot. The backstory and world building are great.
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
Elm
7/1/23, 5:33 AM
Very good! I loved both Clark and Sal!
6/30/23, 5:39 PM
I really loved the entire story and I'm sad that it's over now. So you definitely should do more longer stories. Great writing!!!
6/30/23, 1:45 PM
Your writing is excellent! Great setup!

6/30/23, 2:24 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!!! I published this as a Prologue, next chapters will be steamier 🔥
6/30/23, 9:30 AM
Brilliant, I can't wait to see what the trainers do to poor Lee, LUCKY F**KER!