Recent Comments

mic
7/2/23, 2:06 AM
Wow Great Story, nice ideas, more shrinking and chasity tricking and blackmail , and take their belongings and money, so hot
7/1/23, 11:25 PM
I've begun writing a story about possession myself. It has been a challenge - my object is to use human weakness as an invitation to deeper and truer evil. The premiss of this story is based upon the fantasy of demons and satanic pleasure. While interesting - I find the evil in the human heart is much more attractive to me. Total selfishness and self-centeredness are basic requirement for deep and true sin. Lust is the object - lust for sex, money, power, etc. That means laying aside all the stuff we learned in Sunday school. That includes laying aside our fantasies about the satanic - and finding it within ourselves.
Leo
6/24/23, 8:58 PM
So happy you’re back!! One of the best stories on here in a long time. I love that Dexter is expanding his harem! Cody and Rich are gonna make good slaves to play with. The next on his list should be Brad and Chad’s dad!! We desperately need an obedient daddy slave to join in on the fun!

6/25/23, 1:21 AM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) Well, let’s see. I think I’ll name the next chapter “Daddy Issues” so there’s that…

Anonymous
6/25/23, 5:20 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Hello! just wondering when can we expect the next chapter?

6/25/23, 8:11 PM
@Anonymous Hi. I’ll try to release each chapter every 1 to 2 weeks.

7/1/23, 7:24 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Really hoping it’s closer to 1 than 2! I nearly died after the last wait.
7/1/23, 3:34 PM
HOT Chapter, Supaboi! Def like the new direction of the last 2 chapters.... Can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/23, 9:50 PM
It took me a very long time to catch up to the more recent stuff, and it was very nice to see the evolution of your style. The story also went in many funny directions. 😍 I do have a problem with your overuse of capital letters, but this seems to have calmed down in recent chapters.

7/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks, Bobby!! Appreciate ALL of your comments!! My overall style continues to be "a work in progress", but hearing comments from you are certainly helpful "to hone in on my shortcomings"... I had been utilizing the capital letters mainly to demonstrate "moments of anger/domination/strength".... but I will keep your comment in mind for future chapters/stories!! Super GR8FUL that you're diggin the storyline & hope you enjoy the next chapter (which is currently in review)!! Happy 4th!:firecracker:
7/1/23, 2:46 PM
Part 2? Please 🙏
Anonymous
7/1/23, 2:22 PM
I keep on rereading, this is so lovely
7/1/23, 2:08 PM
This story needs a continuation. Itsvery detailed and so hot. The backstory and world building are great.
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
Elm
7/1/23, 5:33 AM
Very good! I loved both Clark and Sal!