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7/5/23, 4:56 PM
You always deliver. You create such a great mood in your writing, seducing the reader to keep going deeper. Back cover blurb: YOU'RE FUCKING AMAZING! Now here is one of those paradox things with me and your writing: you love helmets, which I'm guessing is part of the kink (?). But as a READER, I really want to know what's going on with the convertee emotionally, you know? That said, you BRILLIANTLY give us the crazy conversion scenes that are super hot without it. I know what's going on with your character, yet I still can't help but hope that someday you give me a face. You see -- paradox. Thank you for this persistent erection.

7/5/23, 5:06 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks for the compliment and sharing your thoughts. When I first published the story, I actually had the character's name. But after posting and given it a reread, one of my edits was to take out the name and put ”redacted information". The idea is for the reader to project themselves into either the Drone or the Recruiter. In this story, I purposely gave as little information as possible, allowing the reader to assume the character they prefer. I wanted to make another edit by removing the description and license plate of the car. I worried being specific on that detail could inhibit the reader of assuming an identity. So I may go back in and edit that. My general rule is trying to get the reader as invested as possible. I hope that if I feel invested, then the reader does too. If I'm hard, then you are. And in a way, I'm using this story to control both your mind and body. I do that simply by inserting ideas that ultimately compel you to jack off. Isn't mind control awesome?

7/5/23, 5:18 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Crap. I forgot to answer one of your questions. You asked "what's going on with the devotee"? Well, because you're supposed to be assuming the identity of one of the characters, whatever you feel as you read the story is exactly what that character is feeling. So if you're aroused and exhilarated, then he's feeling the same way. He was, after all, picked up in a fetish bar. Maybe his protests were part of a scene, or his inner fantasy? Also, I wanted to slip in another kinda ... Let's call it an Easter egg. The first paragraph can also be interpreted as me talking to you. I've been writing these kind of stories for more than 15 years. I can't even count how many stories or chapters I've posted. And I feel that I can get repetitive. Because my stories generally have similar themes: rubber, drone, conversion, etc. So the first line can be seen as me (the writer) asking you (the reader): do you ever get tired of my stories? But I answered: this is my job. And at the end, when "I'm" jacking off, I tell you that I'm just happy at my job. And that these stories tend to rejuvenate me. So, I guess this story gets a bit "meta".

Martin
7/5/23, 8:23 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I get it. Yes, it's your job. You're really good at your job. I'll never get tired of your stories!

7/5/23, 9:39 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Isn't it your job too? Hmmm ... now I'm wondering if it's you who are really controlling us. What if it's really you who are the source or center of this mind control collective, and it's you (through the use of this website) that has amassed a massive army of men for use of whatever you fancy.
7/5/23, 9:04 PM
This is super fun and sexy. What a great story!
7/5/23, 8:26 PM
Might be interesting to involve Chad's brother - cure him mentally at the price of total enslavement.
Martin
7/5/23, 8:21 PM
That was really really hot. You absolutely delivered. I could let my imagination run, filling the gaps of what the subject had experienced. Even though I certainly don't mind a story from their pov...
7/5/23, 7:46 PM
This has been great.
mic
7/5/23, 7:27 PM
fucking hot story, love it, great ideas,please more, more tricking, more filming foto and -ID within the outlines of his spanked handprint.- great. please more
7/5/23, 2:22 AM
Another fantastic story.

7/5/23, 3:58 PM
@[Hypnosubboi92](/user/show/10017257) Thank you for enjoying it!
7/5/23, 3:06 PM
awesome, hope to have more stories
7/5/23, 3:01 PM
Wow. This is extremely hot. Big tease for the reader as much as it is for the narrator and his soon to be thrall. The thrall thing provide the narrator and the reader with something to be teased about, even while getting these nuggets of intense, hot sex. Nice work! I’m very interested to read more.
7/5/23, 2:22 PM
Thanks, Supermanluvvr! Appreciate the positive comments & glad 2 hear U enjoyed the various curveballs in the storyline! I thought it was high time that Lex regained control...no matter the sacrifices! GR8FUL 4 your continued interest & support!:star_struck: