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Muscle-Flex
6/9/25, 12:32 AM
Splat... splat... splat... splat... splat.............. Brooooooooo! Noah really used every tool in his arsenal to turn Liam's brain to mush. All rolled up in "It was just an experiment, dude. Don't get so worked up, well, unless you're gonna lick my pits whenever I flash 'em to ya... which might happen right now..." Noah is going to drive Liam crazy with confusion and lust. Further down the slippery slope the big boy goes. And the experiment ain't over! :muscle:

lukas pucci
6/9/25, 1:06 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) brooo ur comment made me laugh out loud noah’s def got a whole damn manual for brain-melting liam and he’s not even halfway thru the chapters yet lol. appreciate u reading man fr. splat splat

6/18/25, 7:21 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) dude, just realized u appear as a 'loyal fan' for Gaslighting Liam. hit me up on my email, i have something for u, lemme know ure muscle-flex
AAA
6/15/25, 10:41 PM
First off, this is amazing smut. Not quite my cup of tea, but excellent by any measure, and I've gotten off to it twice so far. The third time will be my reward for bothering to type this ;). --- Just wondering; and I do feel it's a bit rude to put requests into a review, but I'm gonna do it anyway. 'cuz I'm greedy and I think you'd craft any porn well: How much does the idea exploring/portraying Michael getting into bodybuilding with Cody; and then Michael pushing himself and Cody into going further than Cody initially intended appeal to you as a writer? --- At this point I might as well write what I would find hot, and hope that it tickles your fancy. - Depiction of muscle growth and typical masculine traits (and eagerness both for; and to further develop) those throughout. - Cody's method of influnce over Michael is discovered by Michael (after Michael is already heavily influenced to like what is being done to him) - Michael uses said method on Cody, and possibly on himself _via_ Cody in a recursive method - The two of them grow into hairy muscle jocks who love taking and giving cock **hard**, and love working out hard and love when the other is working out hard. - Maybe a few scenes of them working out and exulting in their shared masculinity. Forgive the lack of imagination in my idea/request, but sometimes a man wants something that's a bit simple, but crafted with the skill you've demonstrated. ---- Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna do some pushups, stick a vibrator in myself and then reread this piece of fucking art that you so generously shared with us all. [Edit: The reason that I don't think my idea/request might be your personal cup of smut is that you chose to go with a 'boy/daddy' plotline in this, whereas I'm hoping to see (i.e. **_fucking love the idea of_**) both parties fall under the influence of eachother's (new) desires, so that 1. they both become/regard eachother as peers, 2. neither has _actual_ control over the situation as a whole]

6/16/25, 1:26 AM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Hi there! Thank you very much for the detailed comment. I very much appreciate it and I’m glad that the story got you off, despite it not fully being up your alley. As you predicted, I don’t think that I’m interested in exploring the story progression that you suggested. I’m not saying that your suggestion was bad, it’s just not something that I’m very into. The main thing that appeals to me about hypnosis/mind control is the potential to create a dom/sub dynamic. I like when one person is firmly in control of the other, and hypnosis/mind is a great vehicle for exploring that. Something about the addition sweat/pheromones to the dynamic reinforces it for me, probably because it’s a very traditionally masculine trait, which is how I usually like to portray the doms in my stories. I totally understand why shifting dynamics appeal to people, I just don’t see myself going down that path. Also, even though I do like muscles (one of my top kinks), I’m not that into muscle growth. However, I do want to say that I don’t find you giving me the request to be rude. After all, if you never ask, you’ll never know. If it was **only** the request with no commentary on this story, I may feel differently, but you gave your feelings on that and complimented my writing ability, both of which I appreciate.

6/18/25, 5:37 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Dude, reading reviews like yours are so good, keep doing it please
FDR
6/17/25, 4:26 PM
Amazing story, even if it was written using AI, like someone noted. Keep writing!

6/18/25, 10:58 AM
@[FDR](/user/show/10048554) Thanks so much. Yeah, I wanted to admit to the AI use to be fair to readers since I submitted this as a contest and only realized afterwords how seriously people take that stuff right now. If HOW I make stories detracts from the fantasies the stories trigger, I probably won't post here as much, but it means a lot that you and so many others responded and seem glad I posted this one ;).
6/17/25, 1:02 PM
Just a stunning story man. I deliberately took my time and made the story last because I didn’t want it to end. Maybe add some new characters for next part or series? Maybe Milo has a brother with the same gift and transforms others? Maybe Joey has a cousin or brother who comes to visit and gets in deep with Milo or Axel? How does Marcus further descend into mindless adoration?

6/18/25, 10:55 AM
@[Sinatraguy74](/user/show/10007968) Thanks for writing, and I hope you revisit it as often as you want to relive it! I'm not sure I'll continue this exact story but hearing all these comments is giving me some ideas (Milo ordering the football team to all wear pink panties for him keeps popping into my mind), and I would LOVE to write a story about two controllers competing over the same thralls with their powers, thanks for making me think of that!
6/17/25, 11:46 AM
Hot story, but I am 90% sure this was written with AI. Am I wrong?

6/18/25, 10:51 AM
@[Btmboy64](/user/show/10049322) Hey, thanks for reading it, and thinking it's hot. I used SudoWrite for some of it. My feelings with AI right now are that it's okay to create the basic outline, as long as I go back and revise it to make sure it has my voice in it (Any tool that means I don't need to edit my writing until 4am is something I'm going to explore)
6/17/25, 5:04 AM
Great story! I love a slowly corrupted narrator who realizes something is amiss even as he is drawn inexorably into the power of the villain. You've got a great sense of pace, keeping the tension high while still getting into the thoughts of the narrator and fleshing out minor side characters. The scene with milo and the RA was a great touch. It reminds me of some of my favorite stories on this site: Master of the House, Bolshoi Papa, Tel Aviv, and Blind Spot.

6/18/25, 10:48 AM
@[Chesire cat](/user/show/10001871) Thank you for the kind comment! Yeah, I'll just say this has been a fantasy of mine for a long while now, so I'm glad people are responding to it. I haven't read all of those stories yet, I guess I have to now thanks to you!
6/18/25, 12:48 AM
Great buildup to the action. I don’t always get hard reading erotic stories but this certainly brought things up. Wished it were me affected by the pheromones. Good job!

6/18/25, 6:33 AM
@[DW58](/user/show/10003124) Haha, I feel you on that second to last sentence. Really glad you enjoyed the story!
Anonymous
6/17/25, 9:58 PM
Love it. Can’t wait for more from you.

6/17/25, 11:01 PM
@Anonymous I look forward to providing it!
Ithalo
6/17/25, 10:58 PM
Beautiful message from Brazil to the wonderful Noah: menino se eu te pego eu sento tanto nesse seu pau rosado q vc vai gemer tão alto q o som vai ultrapassar a estratosfera vc é um filho da puta tão gostoso que dá vontade de sentar tão forte q quem conseguir me tirar de cima de vc vai ser nomeado o novo rei arthur
Ithalo
6/17/25, 2:07 AM
I can't stop thinking about these two 💦

6/17/25, 7:25 PM
@Ithalo me either tbh lmaoooo