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7/16/23, 5:29 AM
I see it as a risky situation at the very least that Dwight has no hypnotic triggers to ensure his obedience, no matter how stupid he is. Besides, I highly doubt he'll be able to hide from his boyfriend that he made sex with his boss to get a promotion. And I still don't understand how the protagonist avoided the hypnotic effect of Dwight's chest. Those issues aside, I think the story is excellent, with great descriptions and development. Anxious for more!

7/16/23, 12:56 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thanks! Y'know, I agree with you! Dwight's continued obedience is going to need some work. And his boyfriend is no idiot - quite the opposite - so perhaps there might be some conflict there in the future, eh? ;) As for the avoiding the effect, the MC wears "protective shades" - sunglasses, though I might play with that element in the future. Cheers!
7/15/23, 5:15 PM
Well done for finishing the series! I have to admit, this isn't the ending I personally hoped to see, and a bunch of characters I liked are basically doomed. But it was still a very fun ride all the same!

7/16/23, 1:26 AM
@[d-boi](/user/show/10037283) Thanks! What kind of ending would you have liked to see? I played around with a few different endings. But in all of them the drones win. Even before the Idea for the king of rubber had come to me. In my original ending to the series, Ethan would be assimilated in chapter 9. Chapter 10 would follow a discouraged Derek attempt and fail over and over again to escape. Upon realizing that there was nothing he could do, he would seek out the Drone that was once Ethan and fall to his knees at its feet. But this was very early on.

Anonymous
7/16/23, 9:01 AM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) That's probably it - the story went on in such a grand way I was probably hopping for an ending where the drones didn't necessarily win... Or at least humanity got a win as well. Coexistence or something. I got invested in a fair few of the characters from earlier in the anthology and seeing them never able to be together again felt sad. I imagine had it been me I'd likely have gone for an ending where more are given the chance to escape the drone collective, maybe some even like it and stay. Even if it were a weird situation of "I cannot deconvert you fully, but I can at least give you your freedom...to a point", not dissimilar from how Todd had basically played around with everyone when he made his big announcement. That scene filled my head with so many ideas on how it might have gone since it became clear that in the very least it was possible to "deconvert" a drone's physical and mental body at least about 99%. But don't let me or my personal feelings discourage you, by any means. It was a good story nevertheless! :D EDIT: Oops, I forgot to log in to reply to this comment... xD
7/16/23, 8:26 AM
In a parallel, less prudish universe, this would be made into a Twilight Zone episode...
Anonymous
7/15/23, 2:14 PM
Congratulations on finishing this series! I like the ending, especially knowing that now Derek and Ethan will be together forever. I'm glad to see this two get their happy ending in the end. Thanks for making this, can't wait to see your next series, along with the one-off.

7/16/23, 1:31 AM
@Anonymous Thank you so much. Ironically my plan for the new series will follow the style i had originally planned for this series. I really like world building and lore, and plan to make most of my stories interconected, and an anthology series is perfect for that.
7/16/23, 12:43 AM
This has been a thrill to read from start to finish with an awesome rubber conclusion. I just have one question about the ending: was there anything unique about Ethan's brother? He had a notable role in the later half of the series. Does he just end up a standard drone?

7/16/23, 1:20 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yeah he is. I didn't include the fates of every character after Ethan's coronation because i felt it would take away from the apocalyptic feel I was going for. But yes, Eli is just a standard drone. With Ethan's mind warped from being inside the hive mind of the drones, the only thing driving him is lust and the rubbers primary programming (spread and assimilate). Where Todd was sadistic and enjoyed to see people squirm, Ethan is more restrained in his kinks and is a much less "brutal king" (which i tried to show in the difference between Todd's suit, which had an Emperors laural and less gold, and Ethan's suit which was brighter with a more kingly crown). However since his brother is not the item of his lust, Ethan simply sees no reason to elevate him or anyone else like he did with Derek.
hypnosub
7/15/23, 11:35 PM
This story was awesome! The descriptions of going under trance were immensely hot. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

7/16/23, 1:17 AM
@[hypnosub](/user/show/2185111) Glad you liked it. Was wondering if I had people going under too fast, lol
7/15/23, 5:13 PM
Great story and writing! Looking forward to reading more.

7/16/23, 1:17 AM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Thanks - appreciate it! Stay tuned...
Lavender Lad
7/15/23, 10:46 PM
God this idea is so hot, I would definitely like more focus on the hypno next chapter, being hypnotized by your own tits is very sexy and you don't see much

7/16/23, 1:16 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thanks! Yeah, I liked the idea of self-hypnosis. Definitely didn't start out with that in mind, but it ended up being, for me, the hottest part!
Leo
7/15/23, 5:26 PM
My favorite story is back!! There’s just something so sexy about a young guy controlling an older daddy! Please don’t stop. It would also be sooo hot if you incorporated some foot fetish stuff.
Vulcan3
7/8/23, 10:54 AM
Fuck me, this story so far is fucking heat into steam sexy shit. Im loving it all, but i had to pause and tell you the Bat enslavement is really dirty stuff i crave. I got the idea of Batman butt raped by an anon type while costumed from a drawing I saw on rule 34. It's fucking the kink shit art you need to include for this chapter. Go to |gay Batman on rule 34|, look on page 19 and you'll see Batman getting a huge dick up his asshole through a tear in his costume. Write later, Maestro

7/15/23, 4:25 PM
@Vulcan3 Hey Maestro! THANKS so much 4 your comments! Glad you're SO into "the Batman bitching" incorporated in this chapter!! I'll check out your recommendation & be sure to incorporate some addt'l Bat enslavement in the upcoming chapters! I'm always open 2 ideas, Sir...so if you feel inclined to share a few, I'd be happy to spin them into some "hot Bat-kink" 4 U! ENJOY your wknd!:sunglasses: