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7/22/23, 9:02 AM
As always fantastic, writing & awesome imagery.
Anonymous
7/21/23, 10:17 PM
@formalboy for those of us who do want to see the story continue, do you have a way of getting in touch?
CHT
7/21/23, 8:53 PM
Hope this story isnt over 😢
Anonymous
7/21/23, 8:01 AM
Legit some of the best clown stuff on this site. I'd kill for a sequel.
7/20/23, 10:48 AM
Great chapter, excellent writing style.
7/20/23, 9:49 AM
Great story - really hot concept!
7/20/23, 1:50 AM
Goddamn that was a hot chapter. Fuck me Jack…you can describe a fuck scene so well that it puts me there. I’ve gotta jack off now. Damn!
7/19/23, 6:23 PM
This was very, very well written, as others have said. But there's just some great quips and word phrasing throughout, like > It would be like trying to consult your liver on its favorite color; but in this case the liver had an opinion and was playing coy.
7/19/23, 3:27 PM
I would like to see Joe get slutted out. He deserves that.

Tyrol
7/19/23, 4:13 PM
@[Estesi](/user/show/10038626) You might have to wait two chapters for that
7/18/23, 10:36 PM
Yay you're back!! It was a booming of a chapter. I admit I thought it was going to end with both Felix and Joe dominating the hell out of Trevor in front of the group and maybe also making him volunteer to be the house bitch, but this is a nice twist as well. Will his submissive mindset stay permanently or I'll it change back at the end of the contract? The only thing I would add is more dirty talk. I really live dirty talk (but it is a matter of taste)

Tyrol
7/19/23, 4:12 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I certainly rush in my writing too much sometimes and don't give enough time for dirty talk. Good note