Recent Comments

12/4/25, 12:09 AM
Okay - there were a couple of tears again. Master Wayne and Johnnie - SUCH refreshing characters for erotic fiction. They’re almost non-existent in this genre and I commend you!! I’m conditioned to envision a submissive character as being a newbie in his 20s. When you remind us that Johnnie is older, my heart skips a beat and draws me in even more. And I absolutely love that you tied in The Pound! Was a joy to see the stories overlap. What I andmire about your stories is that…yes, technically they’re erotic fiction. But I almost forget that because it actually feels like a glimpse into their lives and not just something you conjured to induce a boner. You let the reader really get to know these characters. They have depth. They have arcs. They evolve and grow. Also, I’m assuming that you know a bit about neuroscience and the subconscious mind? When you write about some of the science behind the hypnosis and programming, you take us right to the edge of the suspension of disbelief without throwing us off the cliff. Maybe you’re pulling jargon out of your arse and making it all up, but it sure reads as though Master Wayne’s research has some legitimacy to it and he’s ahead of our time. I appreciate that your stories aren’t about brainwashing or turning your main characters into something they’re not, ie converting them from straight to gay. They have that submissive part buried within. What they are put through is actually healing and allows them to live authentically. Can’t say enough good things!!
10/12/25, 2:34 AM
Holy eff. I am so glad I stumbled upon this 😳🫣🥵

12/3/25, 5:28 PM
@[Steve-18](/user/show/10037951) i hope ure following the story! lmao
12/3/25, 4:52 PM
What a great story! Who is Will and how did he come by his powers? This is just fabulous and makes a slut like me very envious of all the characters. Still working out which one I’d rather be. I hope you never stop writing and sharing your wonderfully dirty and talented imagination with us all.
12/3/25, 3:47 PM
Hot hot HOT!
12/3/25, 3:11 PM
Thank you for supporting my first series. I have decided to take a break before releasing chapter three to explore other stories. If you want to see a chapter three please feel free to let me know. All feedback is welcome.
12/3/25, 12:44 PM
A very intriguing story, indeed! The idea is great and hot. The excessive AI prose distracts a bit, I think you could improve your text a lot by cutting and editing a bit yourself. But your idea is definitely worth to continue to read this series!

12/3/25, 2:45 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thank you for your confirmation! I'll try to do better in future chapters.
KSfaggot
12/3/25, 3:42 AM
I am sobbing. I couldn’t stop reading.
12/3/25, 2:37 AM
Great story! More please!
12/2/25, 6:31 AM
Sensational!
Anonymous
12/2/25, 6:04 AM
That was just torture smut. Nothing sexy or erotic about it.