Recent Comments

Beasta4U
8/1/23, 5:30 PM
Awesome start!! Get rid of the baggage and let the men take over!! I'm wishing I was him and that the snake was my master ;-)
Beasta4U
8/1/23, 4:37 PM
Keen to read the finished story, would love to find out what happens to the character and his transformation process!! (most likely I'll update the ratings upon completion.)
Elm
3/21/21, 4:11 AM
I like how each of your characters feels like a different person, its quite a challenge to not make them sound the same or have the same personalities. I loved it!

Anonymous
7/20/23, 3:20 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745)

Elm
8/1/23, 1:58 PM
@Anonymous Yes? Haha
8/1/23, 5:11 AM
The story is soooo erotic, I swear I can't last till the end of this chapter. The AI images are cherry on top of the icing!

8/1/23, 11:50 AM
@[chubbychub](/user/show/10011654) Heey, dar! So good you liked!! I'll bring more hot chapters soon! Share with friends you know that like this kind of content and stay commenting the next stories!! Love u ♥️♥️♥️
Mar 23, 2023
Bob
8/1/23, 9:11 AM
Disturbing.
Q
7/20/23, 2:15 PM
Is there gonna be a sequel?

8/1/23, 3:55 AM
@Q No plans for a sequel. I just write one-shots and games.
7/17/23, 11:54 AM
Would love to read more stories like this extremely well written.

8/1/23, 3:54 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Well come back after the author reveal. I've got a couple more stories that I think are pretty great.
7/31/23, 2:20 AM
I LOVE this series. It's so fun, hot, and sexy. I love your writing style and the brainwashing and mind break aspects of the story especially. The almost-too-easy acceptance of something that shouldn't make any sense at all and should shock them from the get go, yet doesn't when Alex explains it like it's nothing, is great. Like, oh, so I just need to swallow your cum and get creampied by you to get protein? Sure, don't see anything wrong with that! And the fact that all these straight dudues are seeing this through their heterosexual lenses, deluding themselves (or actually truly believing) that none of this is gay and it's just to score some brotein, is such a turn on. Seeing the Coach, the boys, and the hot married dads (another major kink of mine) slowly being mind broken and corrupted by their craving for brotein is so hot and up my alley. I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/30/23, 10:28 PM
I approved this, but you may want to consider switching the many many black quotes used for dialogue in the story to quotation marks "like this" -- I think it would make the story easier and more enjoyable for readers to read. As it stands, I found those block quotes really took me out of the flow of the story. This is a fun concept! Nicely done!

7/31/23, 12:23 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Hello, my dear! Thank you so much for your comment. I was really thinking the same when I read again, after publishing. I will mark the cotes "this form" on next chapters. <3

7/31/23, 12:29 AM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Hi Jota! It's also possible to edit this chapter by using the Author and Reviewer panel if you like!

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I'll do that as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
7/31/23, 12:33 AM
Amazing how fast he changed from agent to fuck boy. The wonders of modern science. I'd love access to such a set up and start turning out perfect lovers. The physical transformation was fast but the psychological one was a slow burn.