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12/7/25, 11:03 PM
Currently proof reading again, lost of mistakes I know working on it.
12/7/25, 9:46 PM
NEED MORE! So happy when I saw another chapter of this series. Steve is INCREDIBLE and had me drooling like Dean was.

12/7/25, 10:54 PM
@[RyGuy4](/user/show/10056469) Aw, Thanks! Cap is my personal favorite Avenger so I had to really go all out on this one.
12/7/25, 10:13 PM
hooked me right off the bat, there's something about a black man with nipple piercings that i find extremely erotic and alluring :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
12/7/25, 6:08 AM
HO-LY-SH%T! Randomly read this story without context of the others. This was some of the hottest writing I’ve ever seen. You perfectly captured the essence of Dean and Steve, and I just kept wanting more and more. You had me just like Dean, begging for it not to end. Please give us more! It was beautiful and I will be coming back to relive this experience after reading everything else in the series. This sets a very high bar

12/7/25, 10:07 AM
@[SabastionStorm](/user/show/910642) Thank you so much! So happy that you had such a good time. Hope the rest of the fic lives up to expectations :P
12/7/25, 5:08 AM
Very nicely done. Love that ending too
12/5/25, 6:43 PM
This is such a fantastic story! Absolutely love the way you've written it, it's so visceral somehow!
12/5/25, 2:00 PM
Please continue cant wait!!!
12/5/25, 1:58 AM
Rereading the ending here, I'm thinking that maybe the World going white is Jamie's power erupting to smack down Dauntless...We can hope, I guess.
12/4/25, 1:07 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this series. Very inventive. My only concern is that the over-powering nature of 'The Fire' might detract from the story as a whole. As an aside, I have only very recently dipped my toe in the 'AI Pond'. Until I read Corin's comment, I had no idea AI was involved. So what supposedly indicates 'AI Prose'? And what is 'Contains AI patterns' and how does it different from 'AI Assisted'? Also, are you using ChatGPT, your own GPT, or is there another one out there that is more suited to erotica? Thanks. Oh, and keep up the good work!

12/4/25, 11:34 AM
@[Aaelefein](/user/show/914471) Thank you for your kind words. It's very inspiring and motivating! In my understanding, "AI prose" means repeating plot points with different words, overexaggerating words that are out of context, inconsistent details, and anything that interferes with normal storytelling. The version of AI that I used in this story heavily used em dashes. There are hundreds of em dashes in the original output. If you read more closely, you may find unnatural colons, overly long insertion sentences, and piled-up adjectives. I edited most em dashes out and split sentences, but it seems that wasn't enough. So I am re-editing the remaining two chapters, making them more natural to read. The main frame of this story was inspired by a chat I had with ChatGPT. We discussed the overall lore and main plot, like what this _fire_ can or can't do and the personal traits of each character. Then I wrote a more detailed plot as a prompt and fed it into Grok. Grok is very open to erotic themes, as long as all participants are voluntary and no minors are included. After getting those raw outputs, I edited out the unnatural parts - tons of em dashes, for example - to make it more like erotica rather than dream talk. (The original outputs more like the last sentence.)

12/4/25, 10:32 PM
@[DestinSalvatore](/user/show/1962140) Good, good - Thanks! Haven't come across the problem of to many em-dashes, but then I use them and ellipsis quite often even before I came across GPT. Don't plan on letting GPT write my stories though - I'll write a chapter first, then let it do clean up, check for inconsistencies and contradictions, and suggest content that I wouldn't come up with on my own... I'm very poor with emotional and humor stuff. Great with the technical/scientific stuff though. Grok seems to have the same limitations as ChatGPT - no biggie there. Thanks much.