Recent Comments

9/2/23, 2:13 PM
I hope for more erotic, kinky, pervy, wicked hot chapters! Perhaps some details about what the hypnotist has done to superman's brain in medical terms. For whatever reason, I LOVE LOVE superman stories where he is captured, conquered and converted, but with details on what the "villain" to make him this way. medical talk/terms in discussing superman's just turns me on...
Anonymous
9/2/23, 7:49 AM
I thought this story was excellent. I'm a novice writer (working on a few fantasy short stories at the moment, with the eventual goal of going into more kinkier stuff once I become a bit more experienced) and from my pov your writing is excellent. Seriously -- hats off dude.
9/2/23, 7:07 AM
Yep this is a great. More please.
Willie Cici
9/2/23, 2:31 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great start!
9/2/23, 1:30 AM
I just read all the chapters in a row, it made me horny. Don't feel sorry for your kinks and writing style, this is a site literally dedicated to that kind of creativity. Do what you feel like doing. It's all fiction, if other people can't see that it's fiction, they're the ones with the problem, not you. For a first story, you did very well. Well done!
Unknown
9/2/23, 1:04 AM
https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10007482 the last two paragraphs of this guys story seems to be exactly the same as yours with just a few words switched around.
9/1/23, 9:14 PM
I love horror infused horniness! Amazing start to what im sure will be an amazing series and a hell of a first story. Im super excited to read more!
Anonymous
9/1/23, 8:50 PM
So boring!
Gay Harem
9/1/23, 1:15 PM
Comment and receive rewards! :heart_eyes: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
8/31/23, 3:21 AM
Can't wait for the next part. Trying to figure out if this went according to Sean's plan or not. Hoping something backfired on him. The Florida imagery with the mutant gators looks like foreshadowing. Is that the compromised tech that will infect other workers or will Patrick have to take them out. Thanks for the twist (and tug).

8/31/23, 4:55 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Thank you! (I can't say anything else though. Too spoiler-y.)

8/31/23, 5:32 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Did Patrick get to alter his own course by selecting the hunter wedge from the wheel? Sounded like he did with his reasoning on why he is qualified.

8/31/23, 6:29 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) That was a big oops on someone's part. He was absolutely not supposed to be able to choose what is effectively the _brat tamer_ character class.