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9/6/23, 6:06 AM
This was soo hot thanks x please continue
9/5/23, 12:04 AM
Amazing story so far, but to be fair when I'm reading on this site my mind forgets what grammar or spelling is 🤣

9/6/23, 5:09 AM
@Flamefox23 You're forgetting grammar and spelling? What (pray tell) is your mind focusing on?
9/5/23, 2:56 AM
So happy you're sharing this with us!!

9/6/23, 5:08 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I'll have to admit, I'm starting to feel a little happy returning to this.
9/5/23, 9:24 PM
I feel like my first series ("RECRUITS") is a terrible mess, but it still has very ardent fans. I think there's value in looking at old work and recognizing how much growth has occurred -- it shouldn't take away from the joy you felt when writing it for the first time. I'm excited to see more.

9/6/23, 1:05 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Recruits? Is that on this site? If not, you're going to have to post it!
mic
9/6/23, 12:37 AM
And let him help often unpaid in your shows , and use humiliate him more , love the tricking , please more , great Work
mic
9/6/23, 12:36 AM
Ducking hot , one of the best story’s , nice ideas , please more - can’t wait ! The magician should have cashraped him over his phone , and stuff more often his mouth , and meet him often as footlicker sucker hole , and rent his hole out , and let him pay monthly tribute , hope his genitals get mounded on wall in bathroom over toilet and his balls often abused , and trick humiliate use him more , great ideas
mic
9/6/23, 12:09 AM
Fucking Great Story , please more , can’t wait , hope his head gets used as fleshlight and more stuffed gagged deepthroat and locked in a small box all parts together
9/4/23, 8:50 AM
Much prefer daddies but hot story nonetheless

9/5/23, 11:31 AM
@[chubbychub](/user/show/10011654) Daddies will be back hahaha :wink: :heart:
Malemann54
8/29/23, 4:27 PM
You mentioned before that English was not your first language and a couple of points on how you describe clothes. First off, is it really necessary for you to talk about the characters regular clothes? When you call clothes "social" I think you mean dress clothes as opposed to casual clothes, also unless one is talking about a dress military uniform a man's shirt is never called a blouse. Otherwise the story itself is great, keep up the good work.

9/3/23, 2:22 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Thank u for the tips! The description is just part of the writing process to help the readers to imagine the scene. But sometimes, even I forget doing it hahaha <3

Malemann54
9/4/23, 11:48 PM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Just wanted to go into more detail to describe clothes. Is it really necessary to describe the character's street clothes? It doesn't seem to add anything to the story, keep on with the descriptions of their fetish wear. Ways to describe men's clothes, dress, formal, work, casual, and sport. Also in your first story when I commented on your use of the term "mydear" what I meant to say is that no American man would address another so unless he was intimate or flirting with him. The term "my dear" would be considered both old fashioned and effemanine.

9/5/23, 11:30 AM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) I'm using your tips on the next chapter. I said It was part of the reading process, but I understand that the "treatment" wear add more to the story than the street wear. Keep commenting please! All of you are helping me a lot to improve my stories!! ♥️♥️
9/5/23, 10:12 AM
love this new chapter. I hope Archie King and Buck and his Dad would make an appearance too just like Mav did.