Recent Comments

9/2/23, 4:24 PM
Nice intro. Assuming there's a str8togay element to the conditioning, it will be interesting to see whether it has a different impact on Kyle.
9/1/23, 6:58 PM
This is such a good opening chapter! I love the creepy vibe with the transformed David, and you do a great job of quickly sketching out James and Kyle's relationship. Looking forward to Part 2!

supersean
9/1/23, 8:54 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wow thank you so much! It's my first story on here and I had a lot of fun writing it. Chapter 2 should be coming out soon!

9/2/23, 4:15 PM
@[supersean](/user/show/10009193) Can I volunteer next please
9/2/23, 4:04 PM
Great start, looking forward to more!
9/2/23, 2:13 PM
I hope for more erotic, kinky, pervy, wicked hot chapters! Perhaps some details about what the hypnotist has done to superman's brain in medical terms. For whatever reason, I LOVE LOVE superman stories where he is captured, conquered and converted, but with details on what the "villain" to make him this way. medical talk/terms in discussing superman's just turns me on...
Anonymous
9/2/23, 7:49 AM
I thought this story was excellent. I'm a novice writer (working on a few fantasy short stories at the moment, with the eventual goal of going into more kinkier stuff once I become a bit more experienced) and from my pov your writing is excellent. Seriously -- hats off dude.
9/2/23, 7:07 AM
Yep this is a great. More please.
Willie Cici
9/2/23, 2:31 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great start!
9/2/23, 1:30 AM
I just read all the chapters in a row, it made me horny. Don't feel sorry for your kinks and writing style, this is a site literally dedicated to that kind of creativity. Do what you feel like doing. It's all fiction, if other people can't see that it's fiction, they're the ones with the problem, not you. For a first story, you did very well. Well done!
Unknown
9/2/23, 1:04 AM
https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10007482 the last two paragraphs of this guys story seems to be exactly the same as yours with just a few words switched around.
9/1/23, 9:14 PM
I love horror infused horniness! Amazing start to what im sure will be an amazing series and a hell of a first story. Im super excited to read more!