Recent Comments

mic
9/6/23, 12:36 AM
Ducking hot , one of the best story’s , nice ideas , please more - can’t wait ! The magician should have cashraped him over his phone , and stuff more often his mouth , and meet him often as footlicker sucker hole , and rent his hole out , and let him pay monthly tribute , hope his genitals get mounded on wall in bathroom over toilet and his balls often abused , and trick humiliate use him more , great ideas
mic
9/6/23, 12:09 AM
Fucking Great Story , please more , can’t wait , hope his head gets used as fleshlight and more stuffed gagged deepthroat and locked in a small box all parts together
9/4/23, 8:50 AM
Much prefer daddies but hot story nonetheless

9/5/23, 11:31 AM
@[chubbychub](/user/show/10011654) Daddies will be back hahaha :wink: :heart:
Malemann54
8/29/23, 4:27 PM
You mentioned before that English was not your first language and a couple of points on how you describe clothes. First off, is it really necessary for you to talk about the characters regular clothes? When you call clothes "social" I think you mean dress clothes as opposed to casual clothes, also unless one is talking about a dress military uniform a man's shirt is never called a blouse. Otherwise the story itself is great, keep up the good work.

9/3/23, 2:22 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Thank u for the tips! The description is just part of the writing process to help the readers to imagine the scene. But sometimes, even I forget doing it hahaha <3

Malemann54
9/4/23, 11:48 PM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Just wanted to go into more detail to describe clothes. Is it really necessary to describe the character's street clothes? It doesn't seem to add anything to the story, keep on with the descriptions of their fetish wear. Ways to describe men's clothes, dress, formal, work, casual, and sport. Also in your first story when I commented on your use of the term "mydear" what I meant to say is that no American man would address another so unless he was intimate or flirting with him. The term "my dear" would be considered both old fashioned and effemanine.

9/5/23, 11:30 AM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) I'm using your tips on the next chapter. I said It was part of the reading process, but I understand that the "treatment" wear add more to the story than the street wear. Keep commenting please! All of you are helping me a lot to improve my stories!! ♥️♥️
9/5/23, 10:12 AM
love this new chapter. I hope Archie King and Buck and his Dad would make an appearance too just like Mav did.
Hinner
9/1/23, 6:29 PM
I tried entering the codes and none of them worked... :c

9/3/23, 3:19 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Both should be able to use now since both events are happening now.

Gay Harem
9/4/23, 6:46 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Hey! They should work now. Tell me your ID, please :relaxed:

Hinner
9/4/23, 8:00 AM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Hey, they did work! Thanks!!! My ID is 1191188

Gay Harem
9/5/23, 5:59 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
James
9/5/23, 3:15 AM
I've must say this is by far one of the best stories I have read. Now I'm worried for poor Sammy, maybe he needs to explain why he's afraid to submit. Of course in my case I'd only want to submit.
9/5/23, 2:20 AM
Thanks Jack. Now this is a pickle. I'm sure that Mav and Coach will figure something out. I don't want to live without more of Sammy.
Martin
9/4/23, 8:01 PM
I don't know why you're so anxious about this story. It's a classic rubbrsome, maybe not just as refined as your later work, but it still checks all the marks that I'd expect of your stories!

9/4/23, 11:12 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Oh ... you just wait. The story becomes very talkie. Basically, a character is going to talk and talk and talk. There will be some action. But I had to learn that it's better to move the story by showing, not telling. Later chapters will feel bogged down by exposition.