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Anonymous
9/5/23, 10:54 PM
My Id is 1250785, just started playing and loving it!

Gay Harem
9/7/23, 7:17 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for playing! :heart_eyes:
blankbot
9/7/23, 1:57 AM
Nicely done, supersean.
7/14/23, 7:02 AM
Personally i thought the treatment at the facility was incredibly harsh and Liam's ultimate demise unfair. Admittedly as a submissive bottom slut enthralled with leather and bondage and deeply intrigued with Master/slave relationships, i also loved the deep soft leather, the bondage, the drugging to dim the mind and disable the vocal chords, being plugged and fucked by the orderlies, the authoritarian objectifying nature of the way Liam (as Josh) was treated. Every aspect of Liam's situation contributed to an incredibly arousing story. It seems other readers didn't have nearly the strong objection i felt. Perhaps my sense of mild outrage at Liam's final fate really indicates the shortcomings of my own submissive nature. It's not enough for me to submit and obey. i expect i still need considerable training to be completely docile and accepting of the way i may be treated by Superior Men. I would have been much happier with the ending if the new Liam and Brad had together arranged to have the new Josh released from the asylum to become their slave. Nevertheless i do thank Master Stormbound for an enthralling story, and perhaps for the nightmares and achingly hard morning wood i will be experiencing as a result.

9/6/23, 6:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Glad you enjoyed all the gear and bondage, even if you felt the end was a bit unfair. Then again I did intend for his fate to be unfair, getting what his body lusts for but his mind recoiled from, and a fate that to one is unfair retribution while to the other is just punishment. If you're having trouble submitting and obeying perhaps you need some "treatment" as well. The wonderful doctors at Echo Grove would love to help "cure" you of your rebelliousness and assertiveness and embrace your true submissive nature. Of course once the treatment starts there's no telling when it will end ;)
9/6/23, 5:32 PM
Rereading this chapter was even better than the first time. It also helped knowing what comes next. Jake you are an awesome story teller.
9/4/23, 10:47 AM
Yeah, just in terms of "a story I would read no matter how much you dived into the details", this is exactly my sort of thing. Maybe not erotic specifically, but I'm interested as all fuck in what you're doing here.

9/6/23, 4:28 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) That's great to hear. The other main parts of fracture will also expand the world in different ways.
9/6/23, 1:01 PM
I think it would be hot if Ben had to participate in his dads treatment in the future! Maybe the dad gets super addicted to the anal stimulus and Ben needs to start fucking him regularly.
9/6/23, 6:36 AM
"I just needed to be controlled" 🥰🥰🥰🥰
9/6/23, 6:06 AM
This was soo hot thanks x please continue
9/5/23, 12:04 AM
Amazing story so far, but to be fair when I'm reading on this site my mind forgets what grammar or spelling is 🤣

9/6/23, 5:09 AM
@Flamefox23 You're forgetting grammar and spelling? What (pray tell) is your mind focusing on?
9/5/23, 2:56 AM
So happy you're sharing this with us!!

9/6/23, 5:08 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I'll have to admit, I'm starting to feel a little happy returning to this.