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9/14/23, 5:33 AM
Presiento que Rafa se va a quebrar muy pronto, y no hablando de su resistencia
9/14/23, 3:40 AM
Eu ja consegui, gostei da historia, eu gosto mais quando o cara é forçado ou não consegue resistir, mas sempre tentando impedir, mas gostei de qualquer maneira principalmente a parte que ele foi dopado
9/10/23, 3:02 AM
Hot very hot. Slowly going through the details. I can't wait when he make other military men, his devotees. Start with Sanders and then slowly his SEAL team mates. I would love to see how you would conquer the rest of the camp and even the eastern SOF command even into the Pentagon.

9/10/23, 7:46 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Thank you. My plan is to take my time and slowly have Yates walking a tightrope over the abyss and yes things will be happening with Sanders a at least a few members of his Team but as of right now I don't plan on him taking over the military or the like but then the story is still young so...

9/11/23, 3:12 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Sure I think your taking slowly is great! You could also do a spin-off based on different branches to gather more energy.... :D

9/11/23, 4:00 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Having a Ranger make a deal while training at Ranger School would be interesting, or maybe one of the instructors...but I'm slow a writer enough not sure I'd want to add that but we'll see.

9/13/23, 3:57 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) No problem. Take your time and make the story that you would love to continue writing; no pressure intended. For those (like me) who loves the military stories, note that there are Special Ops in each of the service arms: - Army: Rangers, Green Berets, Delta (usually from Army) - Marines: Recon/Raiders - Navy: SEALs, SWCC - Airforce: Pararesecue/PJ (see this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_UtM9IAHvoc) - Coast Guards: "A" school (see the movie "The Guardian") Lots of opportunities :D

9/13/23, 11:02 PM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) I do have some other plans for some of the branches. I have an alien drone story planned and partly written for the army so I might just do one story for each, each with a different theme, but making each focus on the Special Ops might be a rather good way to tie them together...
9/12/23, 10:46 PM
did you forget chapter 2 or is it a typo?

9/13/23, 4:37 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Hi billi Thank you for pointing that out. It’s a typo in previously posted chapter since it consisted of a chapter one and chapter two as well.

Martin
9/13/23, 5:24 AM
@[I. Dusk](/user/show/10038753) Did you see the email I've sent you yesterday?

9/13/23, 7:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Yes, I got to it just now. I was extremely busy today. Thank you both billi and Martin :)
Blakenikolas
9/13/23, 5:19 PM
Corrupt this town!
9/13/23, 2:11 PM
Better and better
nycboot
9/13/23, 1:09 AM
Years from now, there will be a Modern Library edition of "The works of Rubbrsome." This will fall into the "early works" section. :) So far, sooo very good!

Martin
9/13/23, 4:24 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Funny, I had a similar thought!
9/13/23, 4:05 AM
Hell yeah!! 😛😛
9/13/23, 3:38 AM
I need more of this AND Fear Itself!
9/8/23, 5:00 AM
I forgot to mention one aspect about this series that I haven't really repeated in my other stories. This aspect is the pack or coven. It's literally called "The Brethren" or "The Brotherhood". In my other stories, the characters become mindless drones. And in addition, all characters usually exist on a similar social hierarchy. But not in my first story. The silver figure is definitely the Master, and the other men are is progeny. Think of them like those vampire movies, cause that's kind of where I was drawing inspiration. If you're implanted with a symbiote, you don't really lose your personality. Instead, you just feel an unquestioning loyalty or allegiance to your Master. Because the symbiote was implanted by him, you become his slave. I'm pointing this out because I don't think I've repeated this group dynamic since. I'm not sure why I haven't. I'm definitely attracted to the drone / group hive mentality. But I also like that the Brethren, while they retain personality and independence, are fiercely loyal to each other and their Master. I just see it as if some kind of chemical is introduced into your body. And no matter how much you fight or try to resist, this chemical forces your mind to imprint on another person. It would be a great form of mind control. There's no visual hypnotic spiral. No subliminal audio messages. Just chemistry. Your brain is altered because another person introduced something into your body, and you suddenly belong to him. I actually find the methodology a bit more insidious. :)

nycboot
9/13/23, 1:23 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) You must have a very different view of your stories than we, your fans. What about that story (whose title I forget) but where the protagonists are absorbed into a brotherhood - where you have this unforgettable end because you describe them as singing in the same choir. And there's another story where the man and the son get taken in....