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10/29/23, 10:09 PM
Great continuation! I'm wondering if Chad will use his demonic powers on the athletes that he was eyeing before...
Anonymous
10/29/23, 1:19 AM
This is so hot!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Anonymous
10/23/23, 4:57 PM
will Chad spread to Eric?

10/28/23, 4:25 PM
@Anonymous You'll have to keep reading to find out. Part III has been submitted for publication.
10/23/23, 5:03 PM
This was great!

10/28/23, 4:25 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thanks!
10/28/23, 11:17 AM
I always love your writing but this is exceptional, one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. The leather and Satanic themes are exactly what turns me on. Can’t wait for more.

10/28/23, 4:24 PM
@[LeatherNickLondon](/user/show/10040417) Part III has been submitted for publication, so look for a LOT more of your favorite things soon.
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 5:10 AM
So so naughty! bravo!!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Many thanks.
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 4:48 AM
I do hope you are going to continue this - it’s refreshingly original compared to a lot of the generic tripe on here. Well-written, too. I want to know what happens to King Triton next!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Thank you. I don't currently have a continuation planned but you never know. You can rest assured though that poor King Triton is probably in for a doozy!
10/27/23, 11:55 AM
Oooh, they are in trouble, hopefully nothing happens to the people who got slammed against the wall
Oct 26, 2023
10/26/23, 4:51 PM
Super hot! I love fairy tale fiction. And I love your writing! Bravo