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4/2/25, 4:43 PM
Why do I get the feeling there was a section between part one and part two that didn’t get posted?

4/2/25, 4:48 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) I agree. Well-written story, though! Looking forward to what happens next (and what happened prior to this section)!

BBC admirer
6/24/25, 10:54 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Why did they leave some pubic hair

6/24/25, 11:34 AM
@BBC admirer Since I’m not the author, I can’t help you on that score.
1/28/25, 11:54 PM
It was my fault that I didn't notice the #piss warning in the list of stories...but yuck! That will always take me right out of the story. How bored do you have to get to think piss is somehow sexy?

Anonymous
6/24/25, 7:46 AM
@[bpnghty](/user/show/10002665) Some find it exciting (I do!), it's just part of the fantasy. Remember it's related to BDSM ... Anyway I like that story, a lot!

6/24/25, 10:01 AM
@[bpnghty](/user/show/10002665) There are whole websites dedicated to piss play (and worse, btw). There is no accounting for kinks and preferences. We don't do kink-shaming on this site!
6/24/25, 6:11 AM
Let the fun begin! 😈 Also, I have a small feeling Jake is also a faggot for sure. You should taken coach up on his offer. He would have made him your bitch. In time we will tell who are the fags on the team. 😏
6/24/25, 4:51 AM
Can't wait for more.
6/24/25, 3:04 AM
Love where this is going. Then again, I do love your stories’ theme. Hopefully this and The Path Taken continues!
Anonymous
6/23/25, 2:40 AM
Good story but I do have a problem with "Taylor was of Asian descent" even before all the events happened. Should I assume Kam is of African-American descent then because "it had to be nine inches already?" Why couldn't BOTH protagonists just take on whatever race the readers want them to be? Js. 🤷🏻‍♂️

6/23/25, 2:48 AM
@Anonymous This story was done by request, specifically for Taylor and what happens to him, the description is to match the requester. I left the others to the readers imagination, which I generally do unless there is some physical characteristic I feel is part of the story.

Anonymous
6/24/25, 2:21 AM
@[Max Potter](/user/show/562132) Understood.
Jun 23, 2025
Zander
6/23/25, 5:47 PM
Great story, one of the best this month. I've been waiting for a story on this topic for a long time, glad you wrote it and it's a pity that it's only one chapter. It would be possible to make a series from this story) and see more of Jack's adventures with Xolo.)

6/23/25, 6:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks! Any suggestions (see my comment to @Puppykix) for the sequel are welcome. Maybe Xolotl will return as a [super-hot modern stud](https://i.etsystatic.com/6384594/r/il/ae0041/6256116736/il_1588xN.6256116736_jey4.jpg) (with Aztec genetics) and make Jack his pup and sub. Xolotl has quite a bit of dom in him already. I'm thinking sort of comedic in tone. Oh, and Carter would get an intro into BDSM far more than he ever imagined. Xolotl whisking his boys to his dungeon in the Teotihuacan pyramid.

Zander
6/23/25, 6:29 PM
@[AgingAthlete](/user/show/379995) Great idea if he takes the form of a human and a dog) and there will be hot sex in both forms. In human form when Jack behaves well, in dog form if he has not learned his lesson and behaves badly.)

Zander
6/23/25, 6:35 PM
@[AgingAthlete](/user/show/379995) I forgot to mention that you are a great guy that you add pictures to your characters and give them an approximate idea. I hope you will write a sequel someday, I will definitely read and save the story, as I did with this one. But I like the theme of Domination more, a little gloom and eroticism. It would also be interesting to know why God was sealed and what he did when he was freed? I think it was not just like that and the plot can be developed even in this direction. Where the Aztec god Koloth decides to return control over the ancestral lands to its population. With the help of Jack, turning other arrogant men into slaves and adding dogs to my harem so that they listen to him and obey.
Jun 23, 2025
6/23/25, 4:14 PM
I think the this is a great story and leaves lots of ways to make this a longer thing too

6/23/25, 6:00 PM
@[Puppykix](/user/show/915619) Thanks for the kind comment. Frankly I had to work to make it as long as it was. There are a lot of 'plot challenges' in a story like this. I mean, you can only have Xolo training Jack in so many ways. Then there are the technical challenges between a canine (on all fours) versus a man. I mean, you can have the guy crawling around, but that gets old quick. Of course, magic helped me out. I mean, if this was set in the Castro District there wouldn't be any issues, but in Austin you can only get away with so much. Jack being naked but magically clothed worked pretty well. Any suggestions for a sequel are welcome and Jack does owe Carter some BJs :wink: