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10/12/23, 2:06 PM
I don’t know why I am kneeling in front of the monitor now. ⚫️🟠
nycboot
10/12/23, 12:20 PM
Oh this is so amazing! As far as the plot, it's not really different from the first chapter - but the way you have written it makes all the difference. In chapter 1, we sort of see what happens and realize what humans are up against. And the same thing happens in chapter 2 but the impression is totally different because we are in touch with the internal voices of the Stevens characters. But because we've been through chapter 1, we know what's going to happen and that raises our anticipation and expectation - but that becomes all the more exciting because we didn't expect the internal voices and thoughts and sights of the Stevens clan. To see Big Joe - who we felt we knew before - to watch him transform physical and especially mentally - as he struggles to process the new thoughts and feelings - and becomes something else - it's so wonderful. I'm sure I'm not the only reader who wishes the black/orange rubber stuff would reach into my brain and draw me closer!! You've always been an amazing writer and this shows you still are!!
10/12/23, 10:32 AM
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
10/12/23, 5:25 AM
DAMN! This was amazing. I nutted real good while reading it. The descriptions were great and gave me a really detailed idea of what the scene looked like. I liked the addition of the pictures too, tho.
10/12/23, 3:17 AM
Ooh great and very hot start for the story. Jayson hope to be versed; to fuck and to be fucked. Cant wait to read more from it.
10/11/23, 10:21 PM
Fabulous chapter! I thought the characterization of Big Joe was especially strong, and I loved getting inside his head as he struggled with the alien thoughts telling him to submit. Very excited to see what happens as the tower further grows in strength!

10/12/23, 1:26 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks so much, Hypnothrill. That's high praise coming from you. Hopefully I can keep up the momentum when we move towards Step 3.
10/11/23, 6:08 PM
This was just well written and super hot!! Will surely be coming back to this one. πŸ™Š
10/11/23, 9:05 AM
Really amazing~ All of your stories in the last couple days have been so good! Easily some of my favorite ones on this site.

10/11/23, 4:53 PM
@[Werewolfknotz69](/user/show/10032713) Oh the noise that just came out of my mouth was so embarrassing, thank you! It's really motivating to hear that, especially since it's been so long since I wrote anything like this.
Ab3
10/11/23, 4:42 PM
Woww that's a nice start.. wishing Jayson getting fucked and begging for a gang bang to get his ass fucked by everyone
X
9/30/23, 2:17 PM
New Chapter soon?

10/1/23, 4:38 AM
@X Hi. I'm about 2000 words in for the new chapter. I already submitted my one-off though. I can't promise when the new chapter will appear.

X
10/1/23, 8:56 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Great! excited to read the new one-off!

X
10/11/23, 10:39 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Hello, any updates?

10/11/23, 1:39 PM
@X Hi. I'll try to upload the next chapter before the end of the weekend.