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10/12/23, 8:24 PM
Oh wow! This was such an amazing read!!! I enjoyed it so much, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!
10/12/23, 7:34 PM
It was hot, but i feel kind of sad for Oliver. I liked the Vampire part the best and would have prefered more of it. That's just me. It was arousing with the Halloween theme as the center point. All in all, i would critizise the length of the erotic transformation scenes as a point where it could be better. More erotic transformation, the setting is good and more vampires for me personally. Got me hard and aroused. :smiley:
10/12/23, 5:01 PM
Thanks, NYCBoot. One thing I try to do in each chapter is to add a new element. Once I've run out of things to add, I feel the story has run its course. In Step 1, I really tried to focus on what I called "reception", or the idea that the men were tuning in. So once the men start receiving, that'll naturally lead them towards Step 2 ... their transformation. While Transformation was described a little in Step 1, more was revealed in this chapter. It all started with rvb_ai's image of a man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground. When I saw that image, I wanted to know what he was doing. And the story built itself within my imagination. There is one more step to go. After the 3 Step process, i imagine that it cycles back and repeats itself in a never ending loop. It's funny how you mentioned you're not the only reader wishing for the black/orange stuff to reach their brain. This writer is right there beside you, wishing the same thing would happen to him.
10/12/23, 2:06 PM
I don’t know why I am kneeling in front of the monitor now. ⚫️🟠
nycboot
10/12/23, 12:20 PM
Oh this is so amazing! As far as the plot, it's not really different from the first chapter - but the way you have written it makes all the difference. In chapter 1, we sort of see what happens and realize what humans are up against. And the same thing happens in chapter 2 but the impression is totally different because we are in touch with the internal voices of the Stevens characters. But because we've been through chapter 1, we know what's going to happen and that raises our anticipation and expectation - but that becomes all the more exciting because we didn't expect the internal voices and thoughts and sights of the Stevens clan. To see Big Joe - who we felt we knew before - to watch him transform physical and especially mentally - as he struggles to process the new thoughts and feelings - and becomes something else - it's so wonderful. I'm sure I'm not the only reader who wishes the black/orange rubber stuff would reach into my brain and draw me closer!! You've always been an amazing writer and this shows you still are!!
10/12/23, 10:32 AM
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10/12/23, 5:25 AM
DAMN! This was amazing. I nutted real good while reading it. The descriptions were great and gave me a really detailed idea of what the scene looked like. I liked the addition of the pictures too, tho.
10/12/23, 3:17 AM
Ooh great and very hot start for the story. Jayson hope to be versed; to fuck and to be fucked. Cant wait to read more from it.
10/11/23, 10:21 PM
Fabulous chapter! I thought the characterization of Big Joe was especially strong, and I loved getting inside his head as he struggled with the alien thoughts telling him to submit. Very excited to see what happens as the tower further grows in strength!

10/12/23, 1:26 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks so much, Hypnothrill. That's high praise coming from you. Hopefully I can keep up the momentum when we move towards Step 3.
10/11/23, 6:08 PM
This was just well written and super hot!! Will surely be coming back to this one. πŸ™Š