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10/13/23, 10:44 PM
Great 2nd chapter. Im eagerly awaiting more.
10/13/23, 10:30 PM
I just checked out the artwork on the BVSTARD.AI acct (https://www.instagram.com/bvstard.ai/) and fuckin hell it's all VERY VERY HOT!!!! I just re-read this chapter and I'm going on to the next one with my greased-up cock in hand!!!
10/13/23, 10:02 AM
I have always been a fan of yours as soon as I saw your name, I knew that I was going to like what you have written. I have to say it is near the top of all the stories you have written. I suspect some readers like to imagine what the characters look like, but the photos (and thanks to BVSTARD.AI for creating the images via ai, have enhanced this series) like you, as a lad about the same age as you, I used to watch Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea, loved watching them in their wetsuits, and have to confess at that age I did not know why, but I do now - JUST LOVE RUBBER EVERYTHING ABOUT IT, THE SMELL, THE TOUCH THE FEELING) Thanks again for some brilliant writing

10/13/23, 9:40 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thank you, MalSkin. Up until I actually starting writing, I really thought I was alone in my kinks. Whether it was men in wetsuits, or watching male cyclists in their shorts, or swimmers in the Speedos. I just don't think there's anything more hot or beautiful than a man's naked body. So it's great to know I'm not the only one that thinks that.
10/13/23, 9:36 AM
Another masterpiece! The descriptive writing is superb. You really do feel as though you're standing watching this happen. I love the storytelling from the character's point of view. Can't wait for the next part.

10/13/23, 9:37 PM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Thanks for the kind words. I have Step 3 already written. I'll probably submit it this Sunday, so expect it to be posted on either Monday or Tuesday.
Zac
10/13/23, 5:50 AM
Great idea though definitely needed expansion with the corruption scenes and their arousal.
New Fan
10/13/23, 12:22 AM
I'm usually a fan of explicit penetration, but somehow, the context and background made the kissing quite salivating. . .bravo, Neon Demon.
10/12/23, 10:38 PM
I just realized a possible outcome from this as I reread it again. That after their current episode, the two cops get outed because of all the surveillance in the building. They are fired and disgraced. And afterwards they can only fall back into the hands of their Master to become 24/7 slaves. Being collared and caged with hopefully some slutty slave uniform. Maybe even being forced to work at places like a nightclub were they perform routines as the cops they once were.
10/12/23, 8:24 PM
Oh wow! This was such an amazing read!!! I enjoyed it so much, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!
10/12/23, 7:34 PM
It was hot, but i feel kind of sad for Oliver. I liked the Vampire part the best and would have prefered more of it. That's just me. It was arousing with the Halloween theme as the center point. All in all, i would critizise the length of the erotic transformation scenes as a point where it could be better. More erotic transformation, the setting is good and more vampires for me personally. Got me hard and aroused. :smiley:
10/12/23, 5:01 PM
Thanks, NYCBoot. One thing I try to do in each chapter is to add a new element. Once I've run out of things to add, I feel the story has run its course. In Step 1, I really tried to focus on what I called "reception", or the idea that the men were tuning in. So once the men start receiving, that'll naturally lead them towards Step 2 ... their transformation. While Transformation was described a little in Step 1, more was revealed in this chapter. It all started with rvb_ai's image of a man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground. When I saw that image, I wanted to know what he was doing. And the story built itself within my imagination. There is one more step to go. After the 3 Step process, i imagine that it cycles back and repeats itself in a never ending loop. It's funny how you mentioned you're not the only reader wishing for the black/orange stuff to reach their brain. This writer is right there beside you, wishing the same thing would happen to him.