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Anonymous
10/14/23, 8:17 PM
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Bucky
10/14/23, 9:47 AM
Hello Manicorn!! I recognized your profile picture from Bluesky and decided I should check out your story! Since it's obvious you have a really good grasp of the Mind Control and Kink aspects of the story, I decided my approach would be to review it like any other fan fiction so here are my thoughts: While I don't know Hercules quite as well in Marvel Comics context, I did think you got his character down very well. Now there WAS a recent example of him crying at the death of his family in Avengers No Way Home issue #8 (2019), but I don't think many people read that series so I don't think anyone would blame you for missing that. Also he was having his emotions fucked with or something. It's not a great book. Alternatively, your story probably isn't 616 canon and may even take place before those events. Either way I think you did a great job with this first chapter and I'm excited to read what else you have! Excited to see your take on the X-Men! Bucky

10/14/23, 8:08 PM
@Bucky Hey, thanks so much for checking out my stuff! It means a lot you follow me on multiple sites. And I loved receiving a review just for how in-character a kink fic like this is. In regards to Hercules, he meant brought to tears through corporal punishment, not through genuine grief or emotion. And you're correct this isn't strictly 616, though it takes more cues from that 'verse than anywhere else. Rather, it's a universe me and my boyfriend created that just happens to include the sexiest parts of any Marvel adaptation we like, so it's kinda a mish-mosh. But that way, any disparity can easily be hand waved if they bother you. If you like the X-Men I think you'll enjoy several chapters down the line that focus on them. One just went up today!
Anonymous
10/14/23, 8:05 PM
The first part of the story was standard hypno and I was wondering when the theme was going to kick in. The spooky slowly grew and was exponentially dark at the end. I'm debating if it's too dark for my liking since Rocco seemed like a good guy but also I found myself wanting to get my hands on Rocco next.
10/14/23, 6:57 PM
Great second chapter. It lived up to expectation. Our Johnny is a great bottom jock!
X
10/14/23, 4:44 PM
Excellent! I can’t wait for what comes next! , especially of how Coach Jenkins explains all the fun marks he has to his wife and what Dexter does next to him and his adult sons😉
Anonymous
10/14/23, 2:07 PM
Thank you AvionneX for the Saturday morning treat! I always enjoy your work, and it’s a pleasure to read them whenever new chapter comes up! Revisiting old chapters are a given as well, I especially love reading about Brad and his soldier slave saga. I honestly can’t count how many times I nutted to Brad’s chapter. Thanks again!
10/14/23, 1:13 PM
Adorei seus contos! Parabéns. Acho que você poderia deixar em português perfeitamente. É um espaço para todos sim importar a língua
10/14/23, 7:37 AM
Absolutely amazing new chapter! Coach Jenkins sounds like a fun man to own. And the statue/Roman emperor dream i I really like
Anonymous
10/14/23, 5:03 AM
this was wicked. it was hot seeing myself in Rocco's POV. i'll be revisiting this one for wanking purposes 💦💦💦
10/13/23, 10:44 PM
Great 2nd chapter. Im eagerly awaiting more.