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10/18/23, 8:52 AM
Hot, love it. Great story
10/18/23, 7:54 AM
I love reading Johnny gradually go from stud to bitch. Though I'm also about the side adventure Sammy went on with Devlin. Look forward to more!
nycboot
10/18/23, 12:22 AM
Bravo. Of course it's a great story, as is all your work. Those of us who are your fans sort of know that black rubber is going to take over. But one of your wonderful attributes is that one never quite knows how is it going to happen. More importantly, this story has something different - that being assimilated into the rubber network is a good and glorious thing. And like your, this reader (and I assume others) want to join that glorious unity. Despite the hundreds of stories on this site, I find very few have a satisfying ending. What you have achieved in this story is the antidote to that: You acknowledge that your readers and you (as well as the readers among each other) achieve a "communion" with each other when we read your stories. So not everyone one of us may be in black rubber, but perhaps that you have been able to take us on your journey (which is your own form of mind control) might result in a more satisfying feeling. Again: Bravo!
Anonymous
10/17/23, 10:13 PM
What happens to the men when connected to the hive-mind , can they contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind ?

10/17/23, 11:21 PM
@Anonymous You asked whether “they can contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind?” My answer is sorta no. The reason being is there’s not really any need to contact each other. This is because they are of one mind. They are each other. There is a constant, and never-ending flow of communication between any man that has been connected. I'm not sure if anyone noticed but once the men "connect" they no longer speak using sounds. I wanted to write a story in which there is no communication from the converted or assimilated. That way, there would be no monologuing on what the grand scheme was. In fact, I had the scientists go over several cliched possibilities. But we really don't know what their endgame is. But the title of this chapter is "Communion". Communion is defined as “the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level.” So imagine if your mind and soul are constantly sharing. Everyone else’s mind and spirit is moving in and out of you … through you. So it’s not really contacting; they’re already forever part of you. And all of that is being broadcast out like a beacon, luring more and more men towards the tower. I hope that makes sense.
10/17/23, 9:47 PM
Great ending! I also loved the earlier scene with all the men pointing in the direction of the beacon when asked where "home" is--properly eerie!

10/17/23, 9:57 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks, Hypnothrill. I really hoped that this would be a worthy ending. My idea is that the steps basically repeat at this point. As the area around the tower grows, the broadcast or the transmission also increases in range and potency. And more and more men begin the steps towards communion. And by communion, I meant both that men are unified in a community, and also a somewhat religious experience as they sorta worship the tower. It's weird though that you mention the pointing scene. I hadn't actually planned that scene. I was writing the scene with the doctor talking to the general, and just figured that he would present some kind of scientific experiment. And that just sorta fell out of my head. And as I wrote it, I thought: this is creepy! Men all pointing in a singular direction, and not really being aware or why they're pointing. I wonder if I subconsciously got it from Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I wasn't actively thinking of that movie, but I do remember the scene in which all the men point towards the sky. Maybe that's what inspired me ... it's hard to say. But I just typed it out without really planning it. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. But when I first wrote that scene, the men were in the cafeteria, and the women in the gymnasium. And after quickly writing it, and thinking about it, I reversed the locations. I thought it would be appropriate to place the men in the gymnasium. After all, the words origin is Greek for a place that men exercise in the nude. So I thought it would be better to place the men in the gym. So it just shows that I really didn't plan that scene out. And if a writer ever feels the muse, it's best to just write it out and see where your random thoughts take you.
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.
10/17/23, 8:27 PM
Fun story, but one thing that trips me up is the bathroom question section. Servwnts are told them may ask to use the bathroom, and then are punished when doing so... maybe if wording was reworked it would make it seem more like a trap rather than confusing permissions. Regardless, a small detail in an otherwise great story so far
10/17/23, 2:52 PM
Can i order him😈😈😈🔥🔥
10/17/23, 1:48 PM
Damn hot story hope there comes more🔥🔥🔥😈🤤

10/17/23, 2:19 PM
@[Leatherjohn](/user/show/10043300) A few more are yet to come.
10/17/23, 1:36 PM
Holly fuck give me a bottel of that🔥😈😛