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Anonymous
10/19/23, 1:22 AM
This is so hot!!! Please make the next one
10/18/23, 8:12 PM
Mmmmmm hope there come's more start is damn hot
10/18/23, 12:04 PM
Yo, I love that you included hulklings and wiccan, I've never seen them on here before and they are my favorite

10/18/23, 1:18 PM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) Great taste! At some point early on my boyfriend and I each made up a list of Marvel characters we wanted to include, and Wiccan and Hulkling were on both of ours.

10/18/23, 1:39 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Is it a good thing I hope something happens to them, lol

10/18/23, 2:42 PM
@[Joseph22](/user/show/10010520) Well they wouldn't be your "favorites" if you didn't kinda want to see them kinkily objectified and humiliated, would they? -;]

10/18/23, 2:50 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) True, plus it helps that there is so little in regards to fanfics about them, hahaha
10/17/23, 11:38 PM
There's probably something in this story that I didn't really develop. And it's my fault for not doing that. It's kind of hard to explain but I'll do my best. There are ideas in film, literature and art that suggests that there's a metaphorical hole in all men's hearts. That this hole can never be filled. And it seems to explain why we suffer from greed, cruelty, obsessions and pretty much everything that makes man bad. That man is constantly searching for something to fill this hole. Do you guys know what I'm talking about? Well, in my experience, it seems that man is only satisfied, is at that climax ... that amazing awesome moment of sexual gratification. But that moment can feel so fleeting. Just as soon as we reach it, we can't maintain it. So, my idea was: what if when we reached that moment, it was done so in such a way that we connected permanently with other men. And through that connection, it filled in that hole. And the more men that joined and bonded, the greater and stronger the connection become. This idea was hard to convey in the story. Simply because each chapter is told from the perspective of a character. And these characters have a limited understanding. And because they're sorta caught unaware by the situation, they don't really understand what's happening to them. They can only respond by the overwhelming desire to be joined and make that connection. Also, a friend asked me how I get ideas for my many stories. In the case of The Male Order, this whole story evolved out of a BVSTARD.AI's image. It's the image depicted in this chapter. I captioned it as Subject-9 (the man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground). Sometimes, when I see something, my mind wants to explore what I'm seeing. In this case, I was so turned on by the image, I wanted to know who this man was. And more importantly, I wanted to be this man. For me, I saw a handsome man wearing a fabulous rubber suit. His hands were fused to the surface, so I assumed he had some kind of connection to the environment. His face is partially in shadow, given him a tranquil appearance. And his eyes are also in shadow, almost making it appear that he's "powered down" ... like he's in some kind of meditative state. My imagination immediately got the best of me, and created this story. So to answer this friend's question: I usually get my story ideas from the climax. I see the ending first. In this case, I saw a massive collection of men, squatting down on the haunches, being connected into a great community. So then, I had to work backwards. I had to fill in the gaps, explaining how all these men came to exist in this community. I had to explain how he (or we) would eventually end up in these rubberized bodies. And that's how I started writing Step 1. So when writing my stories, I usually know the destination. I just have to figure out the journey.

10/18/23, 1:01 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I think I know what you are talking about the hole in men’s heart, and the only satisfied moment is climax. I believe I had heard these theories before.
10/18/23, 8:52 AM
Hot, love it. Great story
10/18/23, 7:54 AM
I love reading Johnny gradually go from stud to bitch. Though I'm also about the side adventure Sammy went on with Devlin. Look forward to more!
nycboot
10/18/23, 12:22 AM
Bravo. Of course it's a great story, as is all your work. Those of us who are your fans sort of know that black rubber is going to take over. But one of your wonderful attributes is that one never quite knows how is it going to happen. More importantly, this story has something different - that being assimilated into the rubber network is a good and glorious thing. And like your, this reader (and I assume others) want to join that glorious unity. Despite the hundreds of stories on this site, I find very few have a satisfying ending. What you have achieved in this story is the antidote to that: You acknowledge that your readers and you (as well as the readers among each other) achieve a "communion" with each other when we read your stories. So not everyone one of us may be in black rubber, but perhaps that you have been able to take us on your journey (which is your own form of mind control) might result in a more satisfying feeling. Again: Bravo!
Anonymous
10/17/23, 10:13 PM
What happens to the men when connected to the hive-mind , can they contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind ?

10/17/23, 11:21 PM
@Anonymous You asked whether “they can contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind?” My answer is sorta no. The reason being is there’s not really any need to contact each other. This is because they are of one mind. They are each other. There is a constant, and never-ending flow of communication between any man that has been connected. I'm not sure if anyone noticed but once the men "connect" they no longer speak using sounds. I wanted to write a story in which there is no communication from the converted or assimilated. That way, there would be no monologuing on what the grand scheme was. In fact, I had the scientists go over several cliched possibilities. But we really don't know what their endgame is. But the title of this chapter is "Communion". Communion is defined as “the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level.” So imagine if your mind and soul are constantly sharing. Everyone else’s mind and spirit is moving in and out of you … through you. So it’s not really contacting; they’re already forever part of you. And all of that is being broadcast out like a beacon, luring more and more men towards the tower. I hope that makes sense.
10/17/23, 9:47 PM
Great ending! I also loved the earlier scene with all the men pointing in the direction of the beacon when asked where "home" is--properly eerie!

10/17/23, 9:57 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks, Hypnothrill. I really hoped that this would be a worthy ending. My idea is that the steps basically repeat at this point. As the area around the tower grows, the broadcast or the transmission also increases in range and potency. And more and more men begin the steps towards communion. And by communion, I meant both that men are unified in a community, and also a somewhat religious experience as they sorta worship the tower. It's weird though that you mention the pointing scene. I hadn't actually planned that scene. I was writing the scene with the doctor talking to the general, and just figured that he would present some kind of scientific experiment. And that just sorta fell out of my head. And as I wrote it, I thought: this is creepy! Men all pointing in a singular direction, and not really being aware or why they're pointing. I wonder if I subconsciously got it from Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I wasn't actively thinking of that movie, but I do remember the scene in which all the men point towards the sky. Maybe that's what inspired me ... it's hard to say. But I just typed it out without really planning it. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. But when I first wrote that scene, the men were in the cafeteria, and the women in the gymnasium. And after quickly writing it, and thinking about it, I reversed the locations. I thought it would be appropriate to place the men in the gymnasium. After all, the words origin is Greek for a place that men exercise in the nude. So I thought it would be better to place the men in the gym. So it just shows that I really didn't plan that scene out. And if a writer ever feels the muse, it's best to just write it out and see where your random thoughts take you.
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.