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11/25/25, 5:13 AM
Excellent stuff!

11/25/25, 5:32 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it :)
11/25/25, 1:31 AM
I really enjoyed this story; it's clear you put a lot of work into it. I'd love to read more of your stories or a sequel to this one.

11/25/25, 4:45 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thanks so much for the feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It was a lot more work than I thought trying to edit it all but for a first attempt I’m happy with it. I’ve got more ideas for the soothing gooner to have interactions with the other characters so I hope you enjoy those too.
11/25/25, 3:40 AM
Another amazing chapter!
11/25/25, 3:14 AM
Oh my. What a place to leave us. Our first actual look at Dauntless, and it's this. Quite the Chapter, you’ve given us here, @NeonDemon. Somehow, our intrepid heroes will escape Dauntless' and the League's clutches, but how? Maybe Master will bring out Goliath to distract Dauntless long enough for Jamie and Dusk to be extracted? Maybe Jamie's power will do it? Can't wait to see. Personally, I hope that Dauntless ends up as DS-014. Given what he's made of the League, he deserves that fate so, so much. There's a lot to unpack in a chapter that starts slowly, but builds and builds to a big climax. My favorite moment was where Master manipulates Dusk to calm him and then again a few moments later to remind him of his duties. It's a neat little insight into a couple of more ways Master can control his drones. And I really love that Archie willingly submitted himself to this level of control. Then there's Jamie breaking his power out of it's prison. I don't know how much control Jamie will have for and over the rest of his life, but it was truly awesome to watch him take control there and be large and in charge. And hopefully, his power vaporized that damn tracker in his body to useless molecular plasma.
Anonymous
11/25/25, 1:21 AM
Nooooo not this ending, fuck you Dauntless!

11/25/25, 2:49 AM
@Anonymous I'm pretty sure it's not the ending, just another truly evil cliffhanger.
11/25/25, 1:07 AM
This is so good. All of the hinting about the crack in the damn from the previous few chapters has finally led up to this. We also get the reveal of dauntless, after so much build up. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am deeply worried for Dusk and Jamie though.
Nov 21, 2025
11/24/25, 10:17 PM
This story is great! You did an excellent job. I can't wait to see how Josh changes
11/24/25, 8:11 PM
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11/24/25, 7:19 PM
Lord and Master. This is Mark from Cuntruction. This was amazing. So glad to see you back. Please continue to this story. Please. Turn him into a muscled working man slut. Please
Nov 21, 2025
11/24/25, 5:14 PM
What an _incredible_ start, whew. I'm very eager for what's to come!!