Recent Comments

hahahihi
10/15/25, 10:47 AM
I love the story progression so far! excited to see more groundbreaking actions in the future~!
Anonymous
10/15/25, 7:41 AM
Liked the concept and the explanation of his mental state. Part of me hopes that if he’s telling this story, he somehow got freed. If that were the case, would be interesting to see how he navigates his life afterwards
10/15/25, 7:20 AM
A drone transformation would be perfect in all senses with that power
slavethruhypno@yaoo.com
10/15/25, 4:10 AM
Damn this is hot! Perfect Top man becomes the perfect bottom boy -- trained not just enjoy it, but to find his fulfillment in it!
Anon
10/15/25, 3:35 AM
i think you should let the AI help a little bit less... it's taking away from the story. or be more specific with your prompts. You can list out exact sequences of events and topics for them to talk about, how they respond, and even put limits on the AI. for instance, telling it not to use sentence fragments. I've noticed for almost all of Noah's lines and appearances it likes to put lines like this. "Knowing. Calculating. Like he was examining him." It's just a hallmark of AI trying to be dramatic, but it ends up being repetitive and redundant. Preferably you'd ditch the AI assistance totally. But these are some tips to make the writing more fluid and less obviously machine generated. You have to remember the AI can only build on what you provide so if you keep feeding it its own words you're going to get back regurgitation of the same material over and over.
Anonymous
10/14/25, 2:08 PM
I like how slowly the story develops and I disagree that it is boring. Each chapter Noah comes with something new and with each chapter the limit of what Liam would accept is pushed further and further.

10/14/25, 4:43 PM
@Anonymous yeahh dude exactly, tension and gradual changes in dynamic is what makes a story hot. appreciate you reading it!
10/14/25, 1:49 AM
If ya gonna usa ai can you at least tag it and proof read to remove the "of course. Let me rewrite that with more detail"

Jel
10/14/25, 2:32 AM
@[Growing Hog](/user/show/543067) Tbh...
10/14/25, 2:23 AM
Who would've wanted him for this?
Anonymous
5/26/25, 11:30 PM
What do you think of Lucas, Noah? His stories are so good and he looks hot too.

lukas pucci
5/28/25, 5:43 PM
@Anonymous NOAH: LMAO finally a fuckin good question. lucas was a client, was all over me. got mad and started writing about my fucking life. didnt even change the fuckin names.

lukas pucci
5/28/25, 5:44 PM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) LUKAS: shut the fuck up u ass u love the attention

Muscle-Flex
5/28/25, 9:20 PM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) :rofl:

10/14/25, 2:12 AM
@lukas pucci Hahaha I love this. You tell him Lukas, just better hope Noah doesn’t sub in for your new trainer next session!
10/12/25, 3:25 AM
Fucking hell. I am Liam. I have lived this scene. Apparently I am also deeply attracted to (not so?) little psychos… that’s probably fine 🤔 Frick Lucas, I am so glad I found you today. Thanks for doing what you do, and for doing it so well!

10/12/25, 8:04 PM
@[Steve-18](/user/show/10037951) little psychos are the best man, for real lmao. dude thanks what the hell im blushing over here

10/14/25, 1:24 AM
@[lucas pucci](/user/show/10040865) Well deserved my man!!