Recent Comments

12/17/25, 6:49 PM
Wow! So so hot!! Chastity can be such a great tool for initiating, demonstrating, and maintaining dominance and control! i am convinced though that frequent edging occasionally followed by a full orgasm, more edging and forced orgasms are important to avoid diminishing libido over time. i suspect that chastity almost becomes irrelevant for control if the sub's libido drops too low. That is all my own hypothesis at least. i am so willing (excited actually) to act in the role of the submissive if there is a Dom out there who wants to test this hypothesis. Of course it would help if this Dom were an experienced Master who owns a small harem to volunteer as test subjects. The Dom (soon to be Master?!) in this story has the chops to make this happen. Having written this story, perhaps the author has a similar Alpha perspective as the story's Master. If so please feel free to contact me, Sir! In the meantime, thank you so much, Sir, for sharing your wonderful imagination!
12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
Phil
12/17/25, 4:09 PM
Damn what a great story. I would have loved to have seen all those jock studs serving those drinks in their slutty uniforms.
12/17/25, 1:30 PM
Please make one about Pablo becoming a dog!!
12/17/25, 1:26 PM
Wow. You literally did every single thing I could have asked for. It was so incredibly hot. You are just the best writer on here and seem to always check all my boxes. I can't wait for your next one and hopefully won't have to wait for long. I would love if you had an Email we could send content to or a patron to pay for your amazing work.
JustAthought
10/29/25, 7:49 PM
I wonder if people would have found the story just as hot if there was a colour/ethnicity swap (asian dom, black sub for example). If it would change the hotness it would definitely say something.

12/17/25, 10:29 AM
@JustAthought Interesting thought. i am a submissive white bottom boy. i love diversity; i think all the differences between races, enthnicities, and cultures make life more interesting. For some reason i relish submitting to and serving Men of other races, ethnicities and/or cultures from myself. While i would be happy with the opportunity to serve most Dominant Men, i innately and unconsciously put myself in a story as a white submissive/slave. Naturally though i also have aesthetic and other psychological preferences. First my general interest in diversity also applies more specifically to men different from myself. Thus i tend to prefer stories in which the Dom is non-white and the submissive is white. That said i find it fairly easy to focus on the aspects of a story which most arouse me and mostly ignore others. So if the sub in the story was some race other than white, i might simply ignore that aspect of the story. i suppose the bottom line to your question is: a color/ethnicity swap might affect my enjoyment of a story to some minor extent. So, JustAthought, if you asked that question about a swap, you must have thought about your own answer to that question. i wonder why you didn't offer your personal thoughts about your own response. ;)
12/17/25, 9:50 AM
Thanks LockedPig for such hot story. Great ending that left me wishing for WAY more. A real shame that it's ended. Maybe a spin off? Pretty Please????
12/17/25, 7:50 AM
I have to ask. In this world what is the true benefit of being a sub? Are they permanently subs or will they work their way up to being a norm again. I fail to see why anyone would choose to be a sub and be used by others without a massive payout at some point. What is the advantage for companies to hire subs? I understand they are a source of stress relief for staff/execs at Silver level but what happens at Gold level? There has to be some benefit for the sub for this to work. I have a vague understanding of Dom/Sub interactions but the legal and economic issues of this world are not clear. I understand some people are drawn to being Doms and Subs here on Earth but in this world/company it is a business opportunity so I assume there is some corporate advancement from being a sub? This world does not make sense to me. Why would Steve bear so much abuse? Is it just to help Mark rise through the ranks? What does Steve ultimately get in this situation? I read all 17 parts and I'm still confused. It was an enthralling well written story but I still have questions.
MusclesWizard
12/17/25, 7:31 AM
God I wish I was a good boy! Love this story.
12/17/25, 4:39 AM
Such a great series. Really enjoyed this from start to finish. I think you did a great job of keeping things fresh and exciting as it went along, and I enjoyed how you brought it together in the end. Super hot, so many sexy scenes that each part had me edging throughout.