Recent Comments

Martin
11/14/23, 8:32 PM
Es ist erst mal sehr mutig die Story auf Deutsch zu schreiben, das limitiert die Leserschaft automatisch. *Dear English speaker, you can always use your browser's auto translate feature, it works really well!* Ich bin jedenfalls sehr gespannt wohin Eure Story führt. Und ich würde natürlich auch wirklich gerne wissen, wie viel davon erfunden ist und wie viel aus Euren eigenen Erfahrungen kommt! Ihr könnt ja auch gern Bilder beifügen - wieso nicht von Euch selbst (beim Puppy Play kann man sein Gesicht ja besonders gut unerkannt bleiben)

11/15/23, 12:34 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Auf deutsch zu schreiben ist einfach sicherer. Nicht dass wir kein Englisch können, aber damit es sich gut lesen lässt, da ist die Muttersprache einfach sicherer. Behalte in nächster Zeit einfach deinen Posteingang im Auge, denn die Geschichte geht weiter. Das eigentliche erste Kapitel ist fast fertig, und die folgenden 2 haben wir auch schon grob in den Köpfen.
11/15/23, 12:02 AM
For anyone interested, I did generate some AI images of the cast. I typically tend to leave more minimalist descriptions, so you can imagine them however you want, but if you want to see what is in my head, see the links below: [Jayson, Sam, Dr Altman, Randy](https://imgur.com/a/PC79I6u) [Liam, Romeo, Xavier, Des](https://imgur.com/a/kmr2cVe)
11/11/23, 2:29 PM
If that was revenge I think Katie blew it. Dallas seems pretty okay now. 😍

11/14/23, 6:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) He is more than okay. He has a boyfriend and a great ass. What else is there to want>
11/10/23, 4:57 PM
Would have been near to find out that Tyler was somehow in on it. And was video taping the whole thing to send to the witch girl.

11/14/23, 6:25 PM
@[pepefuente](/user/show/1677522) If I wrote a non-erotica sequel it would be revealed that it was a 100% Tyler and that he has wanted Dallas for months and paid Katie to provide the spell. Dallas and he end up happy. Dallas goes back to the gym but can't build muscle. He mostly focuses on cardio and squats lol. It's a little dark and real cute.
11/14/23, 6:19 PM
Liebe Leser, Arcturus und ich möchten jeden Leser bitten, die Bewertung der Story auszufüllen. Uns ist Euer Feedback wirklich wichtig, denn wir schrieben diese Geschichte nicht (nur) für uns. Diese Geschichte ist für uns beide eine Experiment, das viel Arbeit aber auch viele kinky Momente beinhaltet. Wenn Euch die Geschichte gefällt, wenn wir Fragen oder Anregungen zum Schreibstil habt... egal was: Nutzt die Kommentare. LG Vince (Sub) & Arcturus (KeyHolder)
Sep 28, 2023
sho
9/28/23, 11:06 AM
Nice, a singaporean story. Want to chat on Discord about some kinky Singaporean scenarios? sho9860

11/14/23, 2:16 PM
@[sho](/user/show/10023118) Same here! My discord is helloiz
11/14/23, 10:08 AM
Hi AvionneX, thank you so much for this chapter! Thank you also for adding very hot complementary images to the series! I have always liked your story about Brad (now I like his pictures too), but I wanna point out that the pictures of Chad you provided in chapter 2 is very hot! All other pictures are great too of course, especially the ones including collar. Thanks again AvionneX!
11/14/23, 5:47 AM
"But then, a horrible car accident occurred killing many hot jocks, as the driver, also hypnotized, had all his attention stolen by his master's words, instead of the road." Jokes aside, great chapter. In fact, as I didn't comment on the last chapter, I must say it was wonderful. If chapter 13 had a good introduction/conversion to Captain Jenkins, here it shows his total decline into a humble slave. These hot macho men look so cute when they are totally submissive and obedient, don't they? Another point that I'm really enjoying is Cody: I was starting to think that Cody was losing prominence after his conversion, as he wasn't as useful as Dexter's other slaves, like the Bauers, Rich (mainly) and now Coach Jenkins, but since the last chapter you highlighted him again and my favorite part of this chapter was the friendship developement between Rich and Cody. It was very sexy and strangely cute at the same time. But now we have Josh and from what I've seen, he's going to suffer at the hands of his master. Now that Dexter has a whole team of hot guys at his disposal, I can't wait to see his profiles. And Josh taking severe punishment from all of them will be delightful to see. PS: What Dexter said about the Chad's "declaration of love" in Chapter 12? Two chapters have passed and I'm still curious to know Dexter's reaction.
3/31/23, 7:50 AM
:skull: how did Dusk figure out that Jamie was still aroused from last night and directly at that time to send the Grindr Message :skull:

11/14/23, 4:08 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I kinda wondered that myself. The best answer I've come to is just intuition, and knowing Jamie.
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!