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Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
11/13/23, 4:44 AM
I am so in love with this mutual mind-fuck, you have no idea. So inventive!
Anonymous
11/3/23, 7:37 AM
New Chapter this weekend?

11/5/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Next weekend.

Anonymous
11/11/23, 9:22 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Today or Sunday? :)

11/11/23, 2:08 PM
@Anonymous I've added the next chapter. Just wait for the admins to approve it.

Anonymous
11/12/23, 7:57 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Do you think there's a problem about the chapter? some others has been added today and nothing about your chapter, I hope this is just delayed by the admins for approbation
11/11/23, 6:08 PM
I really like this story! I liked the professional way they interact.Then now that they work together, who knows what happens...

11/12/23, 5:28 PM
@[AndVer](/user/show/10033155) Thank u so much! <3 Keep following for more stories!
Lavender Lad
11/12/23, 2:48 PM
Pregnant pause??

Anonymous
11/12/23, 3:36 PM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Yep. It means a pause with significant meaning.
11/12/23, 3:03 AM
Very fun. I wonder who’s gonna give in first.
11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 10:21 PM
Great story! I'm glad they changed each other not just one of them.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 8:08 PM
I loved this story. It was sweet how they end up together and communicating and running changes by one another -- to a degree. It's not going to be long before they're going to need to change their stamina to keep up with that insatiable libido and constantly full balls needing to unload in their favourite place. Thank you for posting. I hope they're very happy together.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 6:53 PM
This was adorable and had very good execution. I really like how the things that were already true stayed in the book; it was a good example of the theme of "perception vs reality".