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11/14/23, 5:47 AM
"But then, a horrible car accident occurred killing many hot jocks, as the driver, also hypnotized, had all his attention stolen by his master's words, instead of the road." Jokes aside, great chapter. In fact, as I didn't comment on the last chapter, I must say it was wonderful. If chapter 13 had a good introduction/conversion to Captain Jenkins, here it shows his total decline into a humble slave. These hot macho men look so cute when they are totally submissive and obedient, don't they? Another point that I'm really enjoying is Cody: I was starting to think that Cody was losing prominence after his conversion, as he wasn't as useful as Dexter's other slaves, like the Bauers, Rich (mainly) and now Coach Jenkins, but since the last chapter you highlighted him again and my favorite part of this chapter was the friendship developement between Rich and Cody. It was very sexy and strangely cute at the same time. But now we have Josh and from what I've seen, he's going to suffer at the hands of his master. Now that Dexter has a whole team of hot guys at his disposal, I can't wait to see his profiles. And Josh taking severe punishment from all of them will be delightful to see. PS: What Dexter said about the Chad's "declaration of love" in Chapter 12? Two chapters have passed and I'm still curious to know Dexter's reaction.
3/31/23, 7:50 AM
:skull: how did Dusk figure out that Jamie was still aroused from last night and directly at that time to send the Grindr Message :skull:

11/14/23, 4:08 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I kinda wondered that myself. The best answer I've come to is just intuition, and knowing Jamie.
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
11/13/23, 4:44 AM
I am so in love with this mutual mind-fuck, you have no idea. So inventive!
Anonymous
11/3/23, 7:37 AM
New Chapter this weekend?

11/5/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Next weekend.

Anonymous
11/11/23, 9:22 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Today or Sunday? :)

11/11/23, 2:08 PM
@Anonymous I've added the next chapter. Just wait for the admins to approve it.

Anonymous
11/12/23, 7:57 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Do you think there's a problem about the chapter? some others has been added today and nothing about your chapter, I hope this is just delayed by the admins for approbation
11/11/23, 6:08 PM
I really like this story! I liked the professional way they interact.Then now that they work together, who knows what happens...

11/12/23, 5:28 PM
@[AndVer](/user/show/10033155) Thank u so much! <3 Keep following for more stories!
Lavender Lad
11/12/23, 2:48 PM
Pregnant pause??

Anonymous
11/12/23, 3:36 PM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Yep. It means a pause with significant meaning.
11/12/23, 3:03 AM
Very fun. I wonder who’s gonna give in first.
11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 10:21 PM
Great story! I'm glad they changed each other not just one of them.