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Anonymous
11/18/23, 6:55 AM
Oh, mark me down for orcs and oozes! I'm a little confused though. If...er, *when* the monsters succeed and escape the dungeon, doesn't that just mean the fratboys will be stuck there alone? Who will torture and abuse them for all eternity then? It's one thing to be trapped in an ancient magical prison, it's another to be *bored* on top of that.
11/18/23, 6:47 AM
Wow!
11/18/23, 6:13 AM
Looking forward to seeing how this will play out. Minotaur, orcs and pets, any werecreature if planned, mindflayers, goblins, mimics, oozes.
Anonymous
11/18/23, 1:38 AM
I mean, technically manipulation can be mind bending, so maybe? Hot either way though, boy shouldn't have kept his Daddy waiting.
IamTheNight69
11/18/23, 12:15 AM
Goddamn you can fucking write I'm hard as fuck and ready for the next chapter(s). Well done you definitely have a knack for writing gay mind control erotica, that sir is a motherfuckin fact
11/17/23, 11:27 PM
3. Jamie did pick up a third black mark from this, didn't he? So according to Valour, that means his apprenticeship to Atlas is permanently terminated, and he's suspended from the League for a year. Enforcing those rules is a bad idea for the League, though. That leaves Jamie extremely vulnerable, and gives Master and Onyx a lot of freedom to work on him, especially if Kane's (already ineffective) oversight is removed.
11/17/23, 11:26 PM
2. The time Jamie was in the club and at Master's HQ. This has bothered me a little every time I've read this Chapter. I guess I have something in common with Atlas - getting lost in the details. 😒 Fade or Remedy said he was in there an hour when the final scene happens.Jamie was with Theo/08/Horizon at least a half hour, and spent another one Pet/DS-011's care. Plus, he spent a while with Master. I'd say 2 hrs is more likely. Did the Fucksticks show up late to the party?
11/17/23, 11:25 PM
OK. So just finished my reread of Chapter 5 and have a few notes. 1. One thing that could drive Jamie into Master's warm latex embrace? Getting proof that Master's tale of the League being behind his building explosion is true. He's not likely to get that, but learning about Cerberus might be enough to make him believe it.
IamTheNight69
11/17/23, 5:28 PM
Wow how deliciously unexpected, you caught me off guard with that plot twist I cannot wait to see where this is going to lead. Well done sir you have me hook, line, and sinker....
Anonymous
11/17/23, 3:36 PM
Man I hope Liam struggles and resists